Bloodrun Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 I wrote this a little while ago ^_^ [spoiler=Original Copy] [spoiler=Poem] “Broken”By: Johnhenry Milbourne I wanted you to know that we all love the way you laugh.I want to hold you tight, so you can be my barrier against the pain.I kept your photograph, because my memories of you are coming short of nothing.That cross we made, which represents the connection of our dreams, and our hopes, has served as the signal for your existence.I'm afraid to say it is broken now.The pain is coming back, our connection is broken, all our memories are being sub-dued by all the things you are going to miss.Why can't you be here?Your little bout isn't so little anymore.Why would you miss that?My graduation is coming soon, but I still haven't planted your flowers, or opened up like you told me to.It hurts when I open up,please hold me tight,because the pain is coming back..and I feel broken.I don't feel right when your gone,but dad says the worst is over now.He says its alright to breather.But it feels so cruel to be breathing, to move on, with you not here by my side.I'm lonesome, I don't feel like I am strong enough.My pain has come, but my power has left.Our cross it broken, and I have lost you,you are sleeping, and your voice is slipping away,all that is left is your photograph.Mother.We are broken.Mother.I am broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 dont ask why but this is what was running through my head as i read that--->[spoiler=heh?] great poem ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 dont ask why but this is what was running through my head as i read that--->[spoiler=heh?] great poem ^_^ lol well I can't balme a person for what they see, when they read a poemlol but that wasnt what i was suggesting, when i wrote itbut i can see where your coming from ^_^and thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 lol i caught the idea at the end, but my own issues saw that image first :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 lol i caught the idea at the end' date=' but my own issues saw that image first :D[/quote'] lol very understandable ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Incredible. You should be happy that you're very talented... :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 ^ True.Excellent drawing, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Amazing poem and drawing man, great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 Excellant poem. ^_^ I can what your are talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Excellant poem. ^_^ I can what your are talking about. thanks alot guys ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 oh my!its...its...beautiful*faints* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 oh my!its...its...beautiful*faints* Lolthanks Gp ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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