RickiMinaj Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 me and icy were talking on AIMand he told me about his poemand i loved itbut then we started making the conversation more complexand finally it ended up with me telling him a poem i wrotei really like keeping things like this privatebut i cant say no to icyso here is the poem i wrote [align=center]Shining in the skyseeing what is truefeeling the smooth breezeand moving from the blue Feeling the happy Gleesharing the sad sorrowhappiness is greatsomething we can borrow But even when theres so muchall we do is stealhatred, darkness and shodowsthats all we want to feel And when the hope does shinewe tend no to see itonly ignoring the matterstill thinking we're perfect I think not[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 lol i said you didnt have to lol but a good poem :P some niche's but good all around i love it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Awesome poem.You are another, very talented, person. -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 good ^_^ keep it..! ^_^ ur very talented! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 thnx glasstin To Icyblue: you know icy, your a very good liar. I know that for a fact. But thnx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Lolapoo. Awesome poem dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tkill93 Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Meh, it's okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted May 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 thnx anchorand thnx tkill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 it snazy but its ok ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Meh' date=' it's okay.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 It's a nice poem Keep up the good work on writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 lots of good poets on this site:) I've been trying to write some myself l really like your poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Great poem! I can understand why Icyblue wanted you to post it so badly! Truly great! ~Zebra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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