SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 i dont like the overuse of the word "when" to describe the effect... but it works for now... Yeah I rushed through the writing part. I'm watching I Am Legend right now' date=' not really focusing.[/size'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 seamless... funny...flow sorta sounds like strategy, but they way you described it, it's a slightly vague, long effect which covers every single circumstance that could happen with this card on the field, am I right? sort of like yankeefan's card...with that considered, entry reserved, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 yes, basically lol... but the fewer text the better :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 10th spot is mine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 hmmm... flow w/out card text... Here's a 2-step flow card. I can't make more steps than that w/out going into microscopic text... so this is the 1st card and if it doesn't rank well, then i'll make a card with more steps of flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 meh your running in 2nd place at this point.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 guess I should make the text longer... shini's card actually seems kinda nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Alright, time to see how my new card goes in a contest. *Entry Reserved* As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field in defence position, you're opponent cannot attack your Life Points directly. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, select 1 face-up DARK monster on your side of the field and increase the selected monster's ATK by this card's ATK. When the selected monster destroyes an opponent's monster in battle, increase the slected monster's ATK and DEF by the ATK of the destroyed monster. When the seleted monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your Life Points equal to the selected monster's ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 san-meti is running first lol, but remember.... stray from the word "when" or "whenever" if you need help.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluetooth12 Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 ummm as much as id hate to say it, im a real heckler for dual types that arent written properly... edit those cards and come back :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Can I put in a different entry? I'm not watching Movies anymore, so now I can stay away from "when" and make a better card. If not, then I'm not watching anymore Will Smith movies, they distract me. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 of course Shini lol, your max posted is 10 lol, that gives that many tries Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 next entry... I'm trying not to follow ATK or Monster-related effects w/this one, though it's probably not good enough either... one more attempt if this one doesn't make it:This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Summoned, select 1 unoccupied Spell & Trap Card Zone on your opponent's side of the field. Each time this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, select an empty Spell & Trap Card Zone. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot Set Spells & Traps in the zones selected by this effect. When this card is removed from the field, destroy cards that you control, or decrease your Life Points by 1000 for each zone selected by this card's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 nice balanced and has flow... your bumped to the top lol, the rest have to remake to see >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Alright, I'm not watching any movies now. Time to get my 1st Place spot back. :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 lol you wish.. 1st place is mine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 ooh little tidbit, there are shortcuts to flow and the following card is one of them... but please do not use this exact method lol, as it is one of my secrets ;) Over CompensatingCounter Trap Card-This card can only be activated when an effect that affects a Chain and forces a Card to resolve in a seperate Chain. Force the activation of the top card of your Deck and remove it from play. If the timing is correct, increase both players Life Points by half their current Life Points. If the timing is incorrect, force the activation of the top most Spell or Trap Card in your opponents Graveyard. If the timing is correct decrease both players Life Points by half their current Life Points. If the timing is incorrect repeat the effect of this card until the timing of 1 card becomes correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 :OI don't... understand... at all...The OCG is kinda bad, which might contribute, but what's that about the timing? Is it, like, nevermind... that confused me even more.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 :OI don't... understand... at all...The OCG is kinda bad' date=' which might contribute, but what's that about the timing? Is it, like, nevermind... that confused me even more..[/quote'] lol thats how my cards are, very tricky and confusing ocg :P.... you have to read my reverse chains to understand XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 whaaaat?!?! what's a reverse chain? can you get me the thread URL? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 whaaaat?!?! what's a reverse chain? can you get me the thread URL? and give more hints? nah just look through my thread list on my profile lol, the rest is up to you XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 I reserve my entry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Ah,,, You should know that I won't go down without a fight. Here's my attempt at regaining First Place... I have updated my Angel's effect. I realized that it wasn't balanced enough, As long as you have 2 DARK monsters face-up on your side of the field (including this card), you're opponent cannot attack your Life Points directly. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle, select 1 face-up DARK monster on your side of the field and increase the selected monster's ATK by this card's ATK. When the selected monster destroyes an opponent's monster in battle, increase the slected monster's ATK and DEF by the ATK of the destroyed monster. When the seleted monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your Life Points equal to the selected monster's ATK. For every 500 Life Points you take as damage from this card's effect, discard 1 card from the top of your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 mind you, i am still gonna give out random points for exceptional cards that didnt make the cut lol.... so dont just stop ^_^ and "When" sounds too final lol.... but balanced, so ill award 60pts for it... still second place though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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