MarbleZone Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 The card isn't great, I'm aware of that by the time it took me to make it (7 minutes with image cropping included :P), but I really liked the picture. I don't own the art. Credit is given in place of the edition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Nice, but I would say something like "If it's a monster, send it to the Graveyard. If it's a Spell or Trap card, place it on top of your opponent's deck. When your opponent activates that card, draw 1 card from your Deck." Good card, though. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Thanks ;)The problem with this is the opponent claiming that they're not activating the card they got from us, but rather a copy of their own they also had in their hand. Guess this one is a little based on trust... :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 I wouldn't run it (and I use a plant deck) but it's still nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Yes, it's not good enough for competitive, I made it that way on purpose: most of the people who comment on Realistic don't keep in touch with the meta, and when I try to make a card with competitive potential everyone calls it overpowered. So I gave up on those and focused slightly more on originality. And now that I think about it, in reference to the thread's title, how exactly is sending other Plant-Types to be murdered by the opponent's cards a proof of love? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Well, it may not be tournament worthy, but I think it is cool. The pic is nice, the name fits, and the effect is interesting. All-around, a very nice card. overall - 13.46/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Thanks mate!I guess I should make more of these spur-of-the-moment cards. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 I like this card. I think it's very original, and I think you have a lot of talent as a card maker. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Wow, thanks! It's not often that I get to hear that kind of compliments... :) However! This morning I gave this card a thought, and found out something probably nobody noticed: this card is unplayable as hell. I made a mistake that makes this card even more useless than it is already. So... 1 rep to whoever finds the playability flaw first! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 you call that bordom? It OWNS the pic is 100 % awesome welldone this is SWEETNESS! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber-Valley™ Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 CUL nice 9/10 That pic goes with it and the sp sumon efect CUL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Thank you both ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Well, as for the playability thing, the only thing I can see is that if the card you pick up is a non-Plant-Type monster your opponent just gets a free monster to do whatever they want with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 No, that's not it, the Plant-Type monster is Special Summoned to your side of the field. So let's say your opponent activates Phoenix Wing Wind Blast and targets Lyosotis. You draw and get a Plant-Type, it's Special Summoned, and that monster gets hit by PWWB instead of Lyosotis. That part of the effect works fine. Keep looking. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Well, I meant that if you pick up, say, Gearfried the Iron Knight, that it would get put on your opponent's deck since it isn't Plant-Type and they'd get to use him without cost (whereas, you get to draw a card if they activate your spell or trap card). That may not be it, but that's what I was saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Oh, I see. Yes, that's definitely a risk, but you wouldn't run this card in a non-Plant Deck would you? Sure there's always that "give your Marshmallon to the opponent" factor or any other "staple" monster that you could run without them being plants, but it's still not what I had in mind. What I'm thinking about is part of the effect being impossible to trigger 90% of the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Yeah, I figured that wasn't it. Oh, is it because most of the staple Spells/Traps don't target? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Well, that is true and part of why this card sucks, but that was an issue from the beginning. ;) No, imagine it is targeted and you don't draw a Plant. What happens then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 no its your OPPONENT can't activate YOUR spell or trap cards (one exception Bait Doll) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Yes they can, if they get their hands on a card we own nothing stops them from using them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Well, the only guess I have left is that your wording is very ambiguous. You say "If not", but if not what? If it's not targeted by an effect, if it's not a plant-type monster, if it's not treated as the target... If that's not it, then you have me completely stumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Well then, let's see if I can make this clear... Imagine Lyosotis is targeted by, say, Raigeki Break. You activate its first effect, and pick up a card. It's not a Plant-Type monster, but rather a Spell. It goes to your opponent's deck and then what? Lyosotis blows up by the effect of Raigeki Break, because it wasn't protected. So then, when your opponent draws the Spell you "gave" him and activates it, since Lyosotis isn't on the field anymore, you don't get to draw 1 card by her second effect. Get it? The last part, that was supposed to serve as backup in case your opponent used the cards you placed on top of their Deck, never happens because Lyosostis won't survive after being targeted. Right? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Oh, I get it now :P Well, that's an easy fix. Just add a line about while she's in the Graveyard to the draw card effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Yes, I think I'll do that, and this time I'll try to do it while focused so I won't make it end up making it broken this time around. :P EDIT: 'Tis fixed. It wasn't so hard since it's not often that your opponent activates cards you own, so it doesn't matter if Lyosotis gets dumped to the grave via Foolish Burial, it still won't be broken. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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