Careless Whisper Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 The morning came...I can see you lying thereYour body next to mine,"Oh God, she looks so fine..."All my life I've been searching for someoneI thought it was lostThen suddenly I met you... I cannot lose it allFeel the loveThe feelings I thought were gone, calling me"You cannot win 'em all"Is all I heardShe's the one who'll be thereToday Finally the time has come toGive eternal love, and toStay alive together is our destinyNo more sorrow, no more painAnd your presence keep me saneIn the night I'll hold you tightUntil the end I cannot lose it allFeel the loveThe feelings I thought were gone, calling meWe cannot win 'em all tonightThe fear of letting goNow I'm the one who will be there Where there's time for goodbyeIn the darkest devotionI'm the only oneFeel my heat when the silence surrounds you tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Nice poem, You made this on Hollow Revenge didn't ya (zug) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MasterOfMagicians Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Great poem!*nothing more need be said.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Nice poem' date=' You made this on Hollow Revenge didn't ya (zug)[/quote'] Dude, I posted it on HR, here, and Serenia. This was really fun to make too. I'll probably have another tomorrow when I get done with Band Practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Lol, it's cool. I'm pretty sure cannot is always 1 word, though (never "can not"), but that's a minor grammar error, so nothing big :P. overall - 13.33/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Ah, thnx Browarod. That helps alot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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