Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 [align=center][/align] This set is in its very early stages, so please forgive the lack of structure for now. Enjoy and rate these first 2 cards ^_^. You might also notice the Creator is "Bloodblue" this is because i am using Bloodrun's OCG fix and wish to honor him for it.Even if the pics dont match please dont rate those, i could honestly careless for this set right now. And do not want you to rate those please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Wicked Draw is fine. Purloin Fay I'm not so fond of. It punishes players for not overextending, it can generate a free +1 every turn as long as you keep hitting monsters AND it provides tribute fodder when you hit a spell/trap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 thanks Crab Helmet, yu da bes kine ^_^... i guess the drawback for Purloin Fay isnt exactly the most balanced... :|... need. to. work. on.that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lalolalo Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 O.O!!! I love those pics... I really like the Spell card effect. Very balanced. And about the monster... I think you should add a cost like "When this card is SS inflict 1000 to your Life Points" or something like that, 'cuz it can make you remove 1 card every turn from your opponent's hand just by tributing 1 monster. And imagine the combo this card and Black Ptera can do, tribute Black Ptera to active this card's effect, and Black Ptera's effect makes him to return to your hand, very devasting combo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 O.O!!! I love those pics... I really like the Spell card effect. Very balanced. 30+ pages of searching will do that 8) And about the monster... I think you should add a cost like "When this card is SS inflict 1000 to your Life Points" or something like that' date=' 'cuz it can make you remove 1 card every turn from your opponent's hand just by tributing 1 monster. And imagine the combo this card and Black Ptera can do, tribute Black Ptera to active this card's effect, and Black Ptera's effect makes him to return to your hand, very devasting combo...[/quote'] i absolutely hate life point balancing, they are no fun... but ill take that into consideration and update it when im ready lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 You've turned them into real cards with pics,eh.They are good,though Wicked Draw's pic doesn't fit much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 They are good' date='though Wicked Draw's pic doesn't fit much[/quote'] it was the best i could find :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 i like the pics actually but they don't really fit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 i like the pics actually but they don't really fit then you find me better ones lol, after 40 pages i generally stop looking... ooh and the cards themselves? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bingo58 Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 The Art and the cards effects are fine to me. Just 1 question about Wicked Draw as the hand limit starts at 6 should it not be 7? Wicked draws pic look as he is suprised to pull a normal playing card form his deck. excellent work 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I like these so far. Cant wait to see the rest. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Very nicely done Icy ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Few minor OCG glitches. Let me patch 'em up for you. Wicked Draw: Deck gets a capital D on Wicked Draw, and the real hand limit is 6. Purloin Fay: Comma after Once per turn and another comma after Battle Phase. Tribute needs a capital t, also, say "Special Summon this card from your hand in Attack Position." Instead of "Special Summon this monster in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field." Since there is no facedown Attack Position and it's always to your side of the field unless specified. Capitalize the t in the. Ok, make those changes and your OCG should be perfect unless I missed something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Few minor OCG glitches. Let me patch 'em up for you. Wicked Draw: Deck gets a capital D on Wicked Draw' date=' and the real hand limit is 6. Purloin Fay: Comma after Once per turn and another comma after Battle Phase. Tribute needs a capital t, also, say "Special Summon this card from your hand in Attack Position." Instead of "Special Summon this monster in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field." Since there is no facedown Attack Position and it's always to your side of the field unless specified. Capitalize the t in the. Ok, make those changes and your OCG should be perfect unless I missed something.[/quote'] um, wicked draw is fine >_> comma, no, comma no tribute noSpecial Summon, nohe said, summon in face-up, because, of effects that are still in the makingand capitalize The? what the hell? NO! Edit:Icy, Icy, Icy, how could you miss Deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Wicked Draw is fine. Purloin Fay I'm not so fond of. It punishes players for not overextending' date=' it can generate a free +1 every turn as long as you keep hitting monsters AND it provides tribute fodder when you hit a spell/trap.[/quote']How is it a +1? You need to keep tributing monsters. In my opinion, both are balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Few minor OCG glitches. Let me patch 'em up for you. Wicked Draw: Deck gets a capital D on Wicked Draw' date=' and the real hand limit is 6. Purloin Fay: Comma after Once per turn and another comma after Battle Phase. Tribute needs a capital t, also, say "Special Summon this card from your hand in Attack Position." Instead of "Special Summon this monster in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field." Since there is no facedown Attack Position and it's always to your side of the field unless specified. Capitalize the t in the. Ok, make those changes and your OCG should be perfect unless I missed something.[/quote'] um, wicked draw is fine >_> comma, no, comma no tribute noSpecial Summon, nohe said, summon in face-up, because, of effects that are still in the makingand capitalize The? what the hell? NO! Edit:Icy, Icy, Icy, how could you miss Deck?Tribute is capitalized and the is capitalized because it's at the start of a sentence. And the hand-limit is 6, not 5. Check the rulebook. And every single card with Once per turn at the start of the sentence has a comma after once per turn. Cyber Laser Dragon, Blowback Dragon, etc. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 @Bloodrun: I went with your direct ocg fix... @Dark Edo Phoenix: I said before ask before you correct ocg, even if its just the text. @Kizzi: thanks @bingo: Max hand limit before discarding is 6, but i kept exodias limit to 5 to prevent any extreme hands... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 @Bloodrun: I went with your direct ocg fix... @Dark Edo Phoenix: I said before ask before you correct ocg' date=' even if its just the text. @Kizzi: thanks @bingo: Max hand limit before discarding is 6, but i kept exodias limit to 5 to prevent any extreme hands...[/quote']Nice move, making a card that completely kills Exodia. You should take that bit out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Phoenix® Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 I like them... good job, 10/10!!^_^ Keep up the good work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 @Bloodrun: I went with your direct ocg fix... @Dark Edo Phoenix: I said before ask before you correct ocg' date=' even if its just the text. @Kizzi: thanks @bingo: Max hand limit before discarding is 6, but i kept exodias limit to 5 to prevent any extreme hands...[/quote']Nice move, making a card that completely kills Exodia. You should take that bit out. i thought of it more as an exodia deck with 10 cards in hand at the end of each turn? overkill lolforgot about Infinite Cards but ill make use of it somehow ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 @Bloodrun: I went with your direct ocg fix... @Dark Edo Phoenix: I said before ask before you correct ocg' date=' even if its just the text. @Kizzi: thanks @bingo: Max hand limit before discarding is 6, but i kept exodias limit to 5 to prevent any extreme hands...[/quote']Nice move, making a card that completely kills Exodia. You should take that bit out. i thought of it more as an exodia deck with 10 cards in hand at the end of each turn? overkill lolIt's name might as well be "Screw you Exodia!" Seriously, kill it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 @Bloodrun: I went with your direct ocg fix... @Dark Edo Phoenix: I said before ask before you correct ocg' date=' even if its just the text. @Kizzi: thanks @bingo: Max hand limit before discarding is 6, but i kept exodias limit to 5 to prevent any extreme hands...[/quote'] No actually, you never said that. And there's no rule that says you can't. I'm trying to help you here, which you seem to be ignoring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 these cards are cool! I'm not sure I would like to increase my hand size, since I duel with not a lot of cards in my hand already. But is could be useful in other styles of dueling where you need some specifics. ^_^ And the monster is very cool with some combos... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 @Bloodrun: I went with your direct ocg fix... @Dark Edo Phoenix: I said before ask before you correct ocg' date=' even if its just the text. @Kizzi: thanks @bingo: Max hand limit before discarding is 6, but i kept exodias limit to 5 to prevent any extreme hands...[/quote'] No actually, you never said that. And there's no rule that says you can't. I'm trying to help you here, which you seem to be ignoring. lol thought i did, major morning brainfart with laziness... but please can you ask and just say that i have an ocg error next time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 1, 2008 Report Share Posted June 1, 2008 Ok. Just thought you might like to know what it is, but if that's what you want, thhen I guess I can do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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