Star Wars Cards. Not finished!!!! But updating regularly!

[Psychic Storm]

here is the first in a long line of many star wars cards.

i checked the ocg, it should be perfect.

 

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Anakin has too little Defense. And lower the levels of your cards.

[Psychic Storm]

oops.... the defense is meant to be 3000, not 300 lol

 

thanks for spotting that.

[Larxene]

obi wan might actually be a little underpowered

but they arent bad

[Otaku-sama]

You're right. Your OCG is amazing! Evil Anakin should be called "Corrupted Anakin" and has too low DEF, and lower their levels.

[Psychic Storm]

*bump*

[jadenyuki52]

Anakin has too little Defense. And lower the levels of your cards.

 

obi wan might actually be a little underpowered but they arent bad

 

take these guys's statements and combine them, then u got mine! i rate ur cards an 8.5/10! GOOD JOB!

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Huh. I was afraid of this.

 

There are two extremely common flaws with these cards:

1. You have created monster types to suit your context. NEVER, EVER, EVER create a monster type, for ANY REASON. A subtype with an unvarying effect (Union, Toon, Gemini, etc.) is fine. But NEVER create a monster type.
   
2. You make all of your monsters extremely powerful. Your Obi-Wan Padawan is Level 8. HE'S A PADAWAN -- try making him Level 3 or something, and then have Obi-Wan Jedi Knight be, say, Level 6 or 7, or even 4 would be fine.
   

Other than that, the OCG is fine. One thing, though: their ATK increases permanently as written in the effect. If that was unintentional, add "during the Damage Step only" to the end of the sentence.