Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 rate/comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 I'm just gonna say this straight... - Picture doesn't suit.- VERY Bad OCG Very confusing effect since of errors. Clear it up please. 1/10 :s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 i see............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted June 5, 2008 Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 um i dont like the pic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 okie............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 5, 2008 Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 Pic is okay, but OCG is a bit off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 if you say so..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Each time an opponent's monster would of attack you directly' date=' they must send 1 other monster from their field to the Graveyard. If your opponent failed for send 1 other monster from their field to the Graveyard, you take no Battle Damage from the attacking monster.[/quote'] Okay, time to address the first problem. Overpowered. It destroys your opponent, AND is a continuous Spell Card. You may want to change its effect so it is a little more balanced. I'll re-write the correct OCG effect first, then a balanced one. Each time an opponent's monster attacks you directly' date=' he/she must send 1 monster from their side of the field to the Graveyard (excluding the attacking monster). If they do not have any monster cards to send to their Graveyard, you take no Battle Damage from the attacking monster.[/quote'] Now, that is much more cleared up than the above effect (there may be some errors still though). Now for the balanced effect: Each time your opponent declares an attack' date=' and you have no monsters on your side of the field, pay 800 Life Points. Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defence Position on your side of the field. During the End Phase of the turn this card's effect was activated, remove the Special Summoned monster from play. [/quote'] Since it is a continuous, it may not still be Balanced, try making it a Counter Trap Card. Since in that way it could be used as a last resort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 thanks for your opinions.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 thanks for your opinions.... The correct OCG isn't my opinion, it is factual. You can change your Text to that if you please (My correction OCG quote) or you can leave it as your own, but I just put that "majority" correct OCG up there to improve your "horrible" OCG. And also so people can properly understand what it does. You may say "This is your opinion" but it isnt, it is fact. Now it's up to you whether you wish to change the text or not. I'm just trying to nudge you in the right direction. If people leave "bad OCG" or etc. ask them what is wrong with your text, so then you can get a full image on what you're doing wrong or etc. I hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 thanks for the tip i suppose........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotfoilcard Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 i would give them their monster back at the end phase...be a pal you know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 then that wouldnt make much differ............. if the monster returns to their field, they can keep attacking after one turn...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 WTF a 1/10 that card is not worth that it is at lest a 5/10 i am not a fan of the pic but remember it does not take 2 mins to make a card (Well it might do.) I actually like it welldone MK 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫Griffinsusername♫ Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 The pic is acceptable but i can help you with you OCG. *glares at own sig and winks* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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