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Never Meet Again - A poem for my beloved by Umbra


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Seven years have passed since I saw something different

when I looked at you

I didn't understand my feelings, I didn't know what it was

Then I understood

 

It's just one week left now

you're off to your school, and I'm off to mine

My heart breaks in two when I look at you

and think “NEVER MEET AGAIN?”

 

I feel that I have to tell you this

before the time runs out

and the last week has passed

We have never been alike; there has never been a chance

You've been loved by the class, and I've been sitting in the shadows

 

Seven years have passed since I saw something different

when I looked at you

I haven't told you anything yet

I've been too afraid

Afraid of what you'll say and what the others will think

But does it matter?

 

I want you to know I love you

And have done so since that day

You have been in my mind, helped me through my life

The few times we've spoke are the light of my life

 

And now? Never meet again.

 

Based on a true story. My life. It's about a girl that has been in the same class as me for the past nine years, and as you have read, I love her secretly. She doesn't know, and this is pretty much my last message before she steps out of my life.

 

Originally written in Swedish.

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Guest JoshIcy

slightly better form id think, and kinda drags on on some lines...

 

but technical errors I see aside, its nice and touching.. id love to see this in story format ^_^

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Its very good!

 

but its not as great as those created by Icyblue xD

 

Keep them coming! ^.^

 

I didn't aspire to become as good as Icy; this is just an expressioning rather than an attempt to write seriously.

 

slightly better form id think' date=' and kinda drags on on some lines...

 

but technical errors I see aside, its nice and touching.. id love to see this in story format ^_^

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I appreciate your comment.

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Guest JoshIcy

lol wow.. didnt realize i was that synonymous with ycm poetry lol. but if something comes out in less than short stanzas, convert it to story format lol. And seeing as you are the Fan-Fic mod, i believe this would look phenomenal as a story lol ^_^

(Ive actually read your guide and its unreal o.o)

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Guest Supreme Gamesmaster

Six words:

 

I know EXACTLY how you feel.

 

Going through things like this is feeling like reality is spitting in your face. Believe me, you'll be cursing at the heavens for years to come. I wish I could help you, but if I could, I wouldn't be cursing the heavens at the familiarity of this circumstance.

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Six words:

 

I know EXACTLY how you feel.

 

Going through things like this is feeling like reality is spitting in your face. Believe me' date=' you'll be cursing at the heavens for years to come. I wish I could help you, but if I could, I wouldn't be cursing the heavens at the familiarity of this circumstance.

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I have been cursing at the heavens for my cowardice.

 

Beautiful' date=' moving and soothing. she is gonna love it.

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I surely hope so.

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Guest JoshIcy

Sorry for bumping this late thread' date=' but I bring sad news.

 

I have sent the girl this poem via an internet site.

I'm quite sure she has read it.

Has she responded? No.

I'm afraid that she doesn't care.

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words such as this mean much more in person... no matter how much will it takes...

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