Bird In Fire.

[Soul Of The Heart]

I just finished making this card:

 

Correction:

 

Please tell me if i need to make changes.

And Please rate!

[Wyhe]

when you remove fire monsters from play,where would they be? (the field or graveyard)

Anyway,the card is good. (7.6/10)

[Soul Of The Heart]

cards that are removed from play are not putted in the graveyard. They are putted on a different pile of cards. Those cards cannot be used in the current duel, once they are removed. Exept by the effect of a card or monster.

[Arekku_Koro]

Pretty cool. Change the rarity, lol.

[Soul Of The Heart]

OH!!! I forgot that!

[Zexaeon]

I think he meant when you are SUMMONING this monster, where are you removing the FIRE monsters from? Are you removing them from the field or the Graveyard? It just says "Remove 3 fire monsters"

[Hoodat1994]

i like the card... good job i think... 8/10!!!

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Here's the fixed up OCG ^_^:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent and remove this card from play.

 

I think you meant to remove the fire monsters from the Graveyard. I'm a little confused about the last effect too, why is it removed from play after it does Piercing Damage?

[Soul Of The Heart]

Here's the fixed up OCG ^_^:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card' date=' inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent and remove this card from play.

 

I think you meant to remove the fire monsters from the Graveyard. I'm a little confused about the last effect too, why is it removed from play after it does Piercing Damage?

[/quote']

 

after your opponen monster is destroyed is removed from play so he cant use it again during this duel.

[N00B Hunter]

Here's the fixed up OCG ^_^:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card' date=' inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent and remove this card from play.

 

I think you meant to remove the fire monsters from the Graveyard. I'm a little confused about the last effect too, why is it removed from play after it does Piercing Damage?

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The monster doesn't get removed, the monster that was destroyed does. But lord whye and you have both specified something important. The monsters says by "removing cards from play", but doesn't say where the cards get removed from (where are they before your remove them?). Do you remove them from the graveyard, or the field?

 

I'll review the card as though monsters came from the grave and the field (2 seperate reviews)

GRAVE: card's too strong, get rid of it. It has 3300 ATK and deal piercing damage, an incredibly powerful aggro. So summoning conditions should be harsh. But they're not... do you know how quickly cards fall into the graveyard? 3 FIRE monsters? Easy as cake.

FIELD: That's pretty hard to summon. Getting three monsters on the field is hard enough at a time; they die so quickly. To work a deck around this card, you'd need to make a deck based around FIRE monsters with summoning as the primary and aggro as secondary, using their applied burn effects as a tertruary strategy. That's hard to make, but if he did get out, I suppose he'd deal some massive damage but be at the same risk from card effects that any other card is at. So, I'd take out his piercing damage effect and removal effect, and making him immune to normal and continuous spells, and continuous traps.

[Soul Of The Heart]

Here's the fixed up OCG ^_^:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card' date=' inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent and remove this card from play.

 

I think you meant to remove the fire monsters from the Graveyard. I'm a little confused about the last effect too, why is it removed from play after it does Piercing Damage?

[/quote']

The monster doesn't get removed, the monster that was destroyed does. But lord whye and you have both specified something important. The monsters says by "removing cards from play", but doesn't say where the cards get removed from (where are they before your remove them?). Do you remove them from the graveyard, or the field?

 

I'll review the card as though monsters came from the grave and the field (2 seperate reviews)

GRAVE: card's too strong, get rid of it. It has 3300 ATK and deal piercing damage, an incredibly powerful aggro. So summoning conditions should be harsh. But they're not... do you know how quickly cards fall into the graveyard? 3 FIRE monsters? Easy as cake.

FIELD: That's pretty hard to summon. Getting three monsters on the field is hard enough at a time; they die so quickly. To work a deck around this card, you'd need to make a deck based around FIRE monsters with summoning as the primary and aggro as secondary, using their applied burn effects as a tertruary strategy. That's hard to make, but if he did get out, I suppose he'd deal some massive damage but be at the same risk from card effects that any other card is at. So, I'd take out his piercing damage effect and removal effect, and making him immune to normal and continuous spells, and continuous traps.

 

ill do that. Thanks.

[N00B Hunter]

no problem. I always like to help!

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Kinda ovepowered. Lower its ATK a little.

[Wyhe]

cards that are removed from play are not putted in the graveyard. They are putted on a different pile of cards. Those cards cannot be used in the current duel' date=' once they are removed. Exept by the effect of a card or monster.

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I know,my point is the monsters are removed from where?

[Soul Of The Heart]

cards that are removed from play are not putted in the graveyard. They are putted on a different pile of cards. Those cards cannot be used in the current duel' date=' once they are removed. Exept by the effect of a card or monster.

[/quote']

I know,my point is the monsters are removed from where?

 

Graveyard.

[Wyhe]

cards that are removed from play are not putted in the graveyard. They are putted on a different pile of cards. Those cards cannot be used in the current duel' date=' once they are removed. Exept by the effect of a card or monster.

[/quote']

I know,my point is the monsters are removed from where?

 

Graveyard.

OK,now I understand.

 

Advice from the LORD:Improve OCG,people may misunderstand your card effect.

[Soul Of The Heart]

cards that are removed from play are not putted in the graveyard. They are putted on a different pile of cards. Those cards cannot be used in the current duel' date=' once they are removed. Exept by the effect of a card or monster.

[/quote']

I know,my point is the monsters are removed from where?

 

Graveyard.

OK,now I understand.

 

Advice from the LORD:Improve OCG,people may misunderstand your card effect.

 

Yes I correted it. Sorry to confuse you.

[Pikachu]

awesome card man, good work!

the 3 fire monster sacrafice is a bit much though...9/10

[commander mike]

nice card...7/10

[Pikachu]

i agree mike, happy birthday :D

um yea, make more, 1 isn't enough you know!

[LS x Pure Envy]

Pretty cool. Make a set!

 

7/10