Axiom_Nor Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 He finally learns: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Well pretty plain. The text should be a little bit smaller and faded away. You should add a building or a tower and lower the opacity it should decrease the space. The text should blend so choose green and fade it away or lower it's opacity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 The render and text don't blend well with the bg. Very plain. I don't really like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 I Like It Are Those C4DS? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axiom_Nor Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 yes.yes they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 Again, as I said about the other one, it's horrible. It's plain, the BG and the render don't match.The render is too small.The text sucks. Again, I've seen you do a LOT better then this, 6.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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