Relinquished intended to work with millennium like millennium-eyes restrict

[LazerSwordKirbo]

Millennium Relinquished

Level 1 DARK 

Spellcaster/Ritual/Effect

This card is treated as "Relinquished" while in the hand and GY. You can target 1 monster on the field: Equip this card to that monster. While this card is in a Spell/Trap Zone: You can pay 2000 LP or reveal 1 "Millenium Ankh" in your hand; Special Summon this card (this is treated as a Ritual Summon) then, if this card was equipped to a monster, equip that monster to this card. This card gains ATK/DEF equal to the ATK/DEF of all monsters equipped to it. Monsters equipped to this card are treated as "Millenium" monsters.

I like how this card works and I think it would fit in well with both relinquished and millennium, but I think the effect is a little bloated. If anyone knows how I could slim the effect down I would really appreciate it.

[Todes Skorpion]

Hey :D

if you want, here is a Possible Streamlined version (same effect, worded more clearly):

" This card is also treated as "Relinquished" while in your hand or GY.
You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; equip this card from your hand or field to it.
While equipped: You can pay 2000 LP or reveal 1 "Millennium Ankh" in your hand; Ritual Summon this card, then equip the previously equipped monster to it.
This card gains ATK/DEF equal to the combined ATK/DEF of all monsters equipped to it.
Equipped monsters are also treated as "Millennium" monsters. "

 

The changes give you:
-Clearer separation of conditions.

-Fewer repetitions ("equip").

-More rules-compliant terminology (e.g., "Ritual Summon" directly at the summoning).

-Equivalent effect, but more understandable at the tournament level.

Hope it helps somehow :D
Cool concept, Its an exciting and creatively designed card