El Beasto Perezoso Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 This is my first actual set that I'm putting a lot of work into.The theme is now "Hellfire." I'm gonna start with monsters, then add spells and traps. It will be basically massive direct damage and double-inflictions.Comments, ratings, and suggestions are greatly appreciated.(Just no vulgarity, spamming, etc., you know the drill.) Comments:Here's the first and second of spell and trap cardsAnd the new Hellfire castleKeep the repairs comin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Make it, "This card may", not can attack your opponents life points directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Hey Eduardo!change the bottom part to: "If this effect is used, the ATK of this monster is halved."Nice, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Pretty simple effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Dude, Beasto, your OCG still makes me want to light 10 M80's and put them in a birds nest(just kiddin', lol, maybe.... :twisted:)(Your Umbreon dances??????????????? WTH????????) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugoyas Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 They are all good cards for destroying your opponents life points quickly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted June 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 ~Bump~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 Better, minor errors now, maybe we can discuss the flaws tomorrow...The current last picture is from one of the most annoying enemies in DragonFable, isn't that right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoodat1994 Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 i think the pics r lil pixel8ed and the effects r a little ovr powrd and the ocg is just terrible... but still 7/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 some of the pics could be better, and so could the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woodmouse Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 I think those are good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted June 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Ya, my ocg stinks, but its better than others.Working to get better pics, but to hoodat, its how dey uploaded, on my comp. they look great.Working on fixing effects.And if possible, could someone tell me exactly what stinkin words to capaitalize and which to not!!!They freakin change it every time a new pack comes out!!!Thanx Every1!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohkid12345 Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 nice cards. could use some effects. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 ~Bump~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Hmm.......I like the new name and the new stuff OCG is better, you forgot that you don't write out Defence points, it's DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted July 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 ~Bump~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fireball_dragon Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 DragonFable!! :D these are some nice cards except the OCG could use a fixer upper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexeaus Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 awsome cards!!!!!!!!!pics are amazing9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted July 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 Thanx guys =-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoon_man Posted July 12, 2008 Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 nice cards i wish Kazuki Takahashi looks at these and turns them into real cards 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted July 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2008 ya know, i wonder if they even know this forum existsi mean they could really take some tips from us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 7/10 - Good job, Eduardo ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted August 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 ~Bump~ Sorry it took me so long, couldn't find the picsturns out i deleted them and i had to recover them lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Hellfire Lords pic isn't so good... Love the effects.. Minor OCG 9/10Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 The TDR, is about right, except that it should, instead of "its ATK becomes 3600", it should read, "...increase the ATK of this card by 2400." Not "attacks", it is "battles". The "new" effect shouldn't be in qoutes.The Transistion to the new effect, you forgot to capitalize the first letter in the sentence. It should read "When this card battles an Effect Monster, change the effect of this card to the following:" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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