Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I'm hoping to create a custom dragon themed deck and this is the first one, I tried making it realistic. Suggestions are welcome. EFFECT: This card can not be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully you can Special Summon up to 3 Dragon-Type monsters with 1500 ATK or less from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. For each monster Summoned by this card's effect this card loses 500 ATK as long as it remains face up on the field. When this monster is removed from the field destroy the Summoned monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Extremley overpowered, Many OCG errors. Plus this card gives an unfair advantage of summoning cards like "Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon." It needs limits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Yeah, I figured it would be overpowered but may I ask, what do you mean by OCG? o_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I inda like it. Great first try. The Summons need to be capped but other than that the OCG is fine.Like I said before great first card. BTW Welcome to YCM :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Thanks for the welcome, but the frell is OCG? *flails* XO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Yeah' date=' I figured it would be overpowered but may I ask, what do you mean by OCG? o_o[/quote'] Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 OCG stands for official card grammar. Don't worry it will get better in time. I still have trouble with it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Official Card Grammar. OOOOOH O_o. I'll be sure to try and fix that as I want my cards to sound accurate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Why don't you fix your card and repost it, if you do, I'll rate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I would if Imageshack would accept my upload. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 I would if Imageshack would accept my upload. I hate it when it does that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 try reloading your page, that usually works for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 The thing is I upload a pic and then the page just seems to stop loading and the pic doesn't upload. Anyway it works now, thanks anyway. I posted another version please tell me if it's still too much and if you could be so kind as to point out the OCG errors I made so I can correct them. Right now though I'm aiming more towards balancing the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Good, I can't wait to see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 It's up. Added the effect in the post for easier reading. Added a limit to the summoning, cards now may not exceed 1500 atk points. Removed the Flute of Summoning Dragon exception, this card may simply not be special summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 7.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 It's a whole lot better. Now all you have to do is capitalize the summoning portions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 This card can not be special summoned. When this card is tribute summoned successfully you can special summon up to three dragon type monsters with 1500 atk points or less from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. For each monster summoned this way this card loses 500 atk points as long as it remains face up on the field. When this monster is removed from the field destroy the summoned monsters. Errors cannot Tribute Summoned Special Summon 3 Dragon-Type ATK dont say points hand Summoned ATK dont say points face-up Summoned OCG is off also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Underpowered. Make it have 8 stars at least... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Once you have made and generated the card picture, click on the card. A code beggining with . I.E: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Not the place to write that, read the rules. I like the card better now (minus the errors). What are you guys talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treizi Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Thanks for all the pointers, I believe I've corrected all the errors. If you find anything wrong please notify me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 He asked about something like how do you post cards. I quickly anwsered him. No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Oh, you posted before I did, sorry for the misunderstanding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Oh... Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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