Silver Dragon Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Interest effects. Maybe raise stars to 8. Pretty good OCG, no problem with the picture, the effect is a tad OP. Perhpas remove the gaining 100 attack effect or the "cannot be destroyed in battle", and replace with an immunity to magic trap and monster effects. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Not bad. Capitalize Dragon in the type category and also instead of saying "This card gains" say "This monster gains". Also instead of battle.You, put a space between it. Otherwise, well balanced, I give it a 13/15 EDIT: When you say, "This monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle" add (battle damage is still applied normally) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkey d.luffy Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 thats really good to be new at this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Dragon Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 where is your disclaimer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Some people forget. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Dragon Posted June 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 i know i got it at photobucket or google Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Some people forget. ya. he forgets and nothing. i actually put one' date=' and i get a lock threat. that is [i']fair[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Cool. I always get mine at google images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death7ofsb Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 heres what i dont get (and alot of people do this) give a monster with a high ATK points invulnerability with and effect that keeps raising the ATK points, in my personal oppinion its pretty much pointless and a waste of card space. but the best thing i can do is igore it 7/10, cool pic, it looks like a water paint pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Dragon Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Thanks for the good comments ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 i think it is a good card maby a couple of errors but good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Well, the OCG isn't quite right. If you'd like me to point out the various parts that need fixing, just shoot me a PM and I'd be happy to tell you. It seems a little overpowered to me, but I'm not sure on that. The pic is nice, but not necessarily for a YGO card. All-around, a good card. overall - 13.22/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Dragon Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 really appreciate the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 the effect is pretty plain....... just crop the pix a little so it wouldnt stretch it......... if you want any help from me just pm me.......~Phantasy Dreamer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Interesting card, although I would prefer the Summoning condition first. Also, could you please review the most powerful cards I've made (in second link in sig)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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