Koolradz0 Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Well hey, I'm Alex. This is my first real Yugioh card made. Tell me what you guys think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 OCG errors, and aside from that, alright card. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 It should say: "As long as this card remains on the field, your opponent cannot play Quick-Play Spell Cards. When this card is activated, add all cards with "Soul" or "Spirit" to your hand. Otherwise, I say this card gets 7.1/10 Welcome to YCM! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koolradz0 Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Ok, made some minor adjustments, thank you Anchor : ). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fero Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 welcome to the forum! keep making a good job 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koolradz0 Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Sorry, but even more adjustments have been made :D I found the text wasn't as mature as I could have made it. Hope you guys enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Great, yes. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 kind of hard to see, a few OCG errors... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koolradz0 Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 kind of hard to see' date=' a few OCG errors... 7/10[/quote'] I revised my text once again and I found an error. Thanks Sbamber. The problem I fixed was the second sentence, I changed the way removed from play cards were stated and what not. Tell me if there are still OCG errors, and thanks ! - Alex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 use double quotation marks around name >.<[" ... "]8.7/10GREAT CARD ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 I like the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazenz Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 the pic is pretty but keep working on effect other than that 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Awesome...Great job!!! WELCOME TO THE FORUM!!! Hope you like it here, and continue with your card making... and most importantly have fun and make friends... Good job, 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Its ok... kinda kills my Chain cards XD... 5/10=1/2.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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