Wyhe Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Post Count:I have obtained 2200 posts!Yay!So,I will now show guys a card of my creation.If you're a fan of Native Amarican stuff,this card will be pleasing. Disclaimer:I don't own those pictures. This card can only be Ritual Summoned by effect of "Stormbird Ritual".This card is treated as a LIGHT monster while it is face-up on the field.When this card destroys a monster,inflict 800 points of damage to the opponent.Any monster this card destroys in battle is returned to the deck.Once per turn,you can tribute 1 monster you control (other than this card) to gain 1000 Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Effect seems choppy and slapped together in a hurry lol.... Not that good, even by ritual monster standards :( 'Insert coin and try again'? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 I beg to differ.I based Thunderbird's effects on other cards.Burn effect-Hamon (thunder)Return to deck-WIND monsters (WIND)Healing-Rain of Mercy (rainwater) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubean91 Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 u tell them whye lol... just asking... do u mind checking my three cards for errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bingo58 Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Like the card and effect would so love some extra wind cards in the game. I just think you need to clarify where in the deck the cards are returned to and if the deck is then shuffled? Hope this help regards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 u tell them whye lol... just asking... do u mind checking my three cards for errors?Ok,but why do everyone mis-type my name wrongly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 wyhe wyhe wyhe wyhe! :D Could be better, but still. Also remember IF YOU PLACE a full stop ---> . Always place a space after it. Might want to check the correct OCG for a Ritual Spell though (unless they updated the Spell OCG). Also, the Ritual might be a tad overpowered, possibly increase LP by 500-700? Since cards like Blockman and etc and their tokens would overpower the card. But I like the idea, I really do! Also GRATULATION on 2200 Posts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark_Pride Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 I just think you need to clarify where in the deck the cards are returned to and if the deck is then shuffled? It should be a common sense that the monster should be returned to it's owner's Deck' date=' but since the effects are read [b']literally[/b], it is suggested that it should be denoted in your errata. It is a golden rule that when cards are added in the Deck, the Deck must be shuffled, unless stated otherwise but since the effects are read literally, it is suggested that it should be denoted in your errata unless there is no space for card text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 I think it's an okay pair of cards. Never ever use "&" on a card unless using it in "Spell & Trap Card Zone", and LV is only for monster names (when referring to star level, it's "Level" ). So, a few OCG errors, but otherwise good. The effect does kinda look chopped together, but I don't think it's terribly overpowered. overall - 13.25/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 The effect is a bit overpowering. But that's just my opinion. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 Thank you guys (& gals) for all your input! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted June 9, 2008 Report Share Posted June 9, 2008 ( Deck ) Another card nicely done, 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bingo58 Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 I just think you need to clarify where in the deck the cards are returned to and if the deck is then shuffled? It should be a common sense that the monster should be returned to it's owner's Deck' date=' but since the effects are read [b']literally[/b], it is suggested that it should be denoted in your errata. It is a golden rule that when cards are added in the Deck, the Deck must be shuffled, unless stated otherwise but since the effects are read literally, it is suggested that it should be denoted in your errata unless there is no space for card text. Card effects often quote Top of Deck, Bottom of Deck and if not returned to deck and deck shuffled, that is the common sense of my post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 OCG errors. Effect seems to have been put together hastily. I'm not a fan of the images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsplayer627 Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 cool and congratulations Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 bumping Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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