Senbanzakura Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Still working on getting better, I'm not there yet =.= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fero Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 mmm.. Great ecxept for some ocg errors but ill give it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Ok, what do you see in the card that i could change to make it sound better?Thank you so much for taking the time to look at it :^D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fero Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 mmm.... maybe change it to "Increase your Life Points by 300 for each monster that has been removed from play"i'am not great expert in grammar but ask other people maybe they can help u more than me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeratuel Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 The effects a little simplistic but a nice change of pace.I do really like the image 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Hmm, they way you said does sound much more OCG. Thank you for your input :^D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Pretty good, but the name is a little. . .idk. maybe change the name to fit the effect AND the poic of the card. overal 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Remove Fairy Spell Trap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 I like the new, this fits perfectly. Other than some OCGs 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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