Pendo Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Please rate it 1 through 10. I got these pics off of google.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Lv 12 Should say "(insert level up condition). When this card is Summoned, destroy all cards on the field except this." Same thing for levels 7 and 9. Don't put Effect:, just write out the effect. Put a Level up condition. And no flavor text w/effect monsters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Don't mix effects with descriptions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pendo Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Demented I didn't. and why is that all you ever say even when it doesn't need to be said? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2sick4u Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Well; Hybrids will never mix well in the rating world, buddy.I say cut it out for minor machine supporting effects; or really basic immunities.(Like ancient gear ones.)Although, that could lead to overpoweredness, but you should focus on mastering the basics first, as balance is pretty advanced ^__^.Also, Instead of saying "By sacrificing this card.."You should say, Well, Just check yu-gi-oh's wiki, and look up armor dragon. Copy it's level uping effect, and you should be fine. =D.(Is the last pic even a robot?..^__^")anyway.Nice try bud.If it's your first: 5/10. If not: 3/10. (Images from movies shouldn't really be used. Use deviantart.com)2sick~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazenz Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 lv 12 is way overpowered and some of the others too,needs work 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chain Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 they are very bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gawd of Spell Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 朋友的作品，很短的一篇小说 杀手，有型有钱又有闲的工作，很适合我，略带忧伤再夹杂少许轻狂，凝视着镜子，觉得自己很酷做为杀手，或多或少都该有些属于自己的象征，就像佐罗要戴面罩，超人要穿内裤一样。因为我是个有品味的杀手，所以我选择了枯萎的黑色玖瑰，自然，没有人会卖枯萎的玖瑰， 于是我每个月的15都会到街口的那家"一心花店"买一支拿回家放着，然后看着它慢慢枯萎风干```````嗯```的确很符合我那种略带颓废的气质。而我为什么只到那家店买花呢？原因很简单，因为老板是个男人。不同于女人，他既不啰嗦，也不会和你乱套近乎。这样就让我省下了很多不必要的麻烦。 多美好啊 今天去拉头发，然后，中途在旁边的粉店吃粉，就是柳州青云大厦下面那家。旁边卖凉茶的。然后要了份粉来吃，我很喜欢吃醋的，就拿了辣椒醋来放了几勺，然后开始吃……没吃几口，旁边有个女的也来要辣椒醋，然后她用手搅了两下……说了句：有蟑螂腿 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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