ABB Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 [/size]"Immortal Warrior + Immortal Samurai"Equip "Immortal Warrior" and "Immortal Samurai" to "Immortal Shine Guardian" as equipped cards. This monster's ATK and DEF is the combine total of the equipped monsters. If this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, remove this card from play and special summon the two monsters to the field.This card can only be special summoned by removing from play "Immortal Flame" and "Immortal Frost". Remove from play those 2 cards to special summon this card. This monster cannot be destroyed except by removing it from play. Your opponent loses 100 life points and you gain 200 life points every players' turn.When this card is summoned to the field, remove from play all monsters in both opponent's graveyards. If this monster is sent to the graveyard, you may special summon it next turn if there are no other monsters in your graveyard. You may do this everytime this monster is sent to the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 good pics, some ok effects. ocg? bad. but overall 8/10 good job for your first cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Those are really nice for first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Oh yeah, and immortal power should have the icon for ritual spell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 don't double post, but you are correct. I believe though that the ritual mistake thingy is apart of the ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Few OCG's, not bad for your first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugoyas Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 great and realistic because this is your first time 10\10 I would've give 9\10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ded!cateD Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Good job i like the pics :) hmm.. i think its a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Ok job, for a first try pretty good :D8/10. Keep working at it and you will get better :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 Very good work. Some OCG errors but nothing serious. Rating: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herrllo Posted June 5, 2009 Report Share Posted June 5, 2009 These are great for first cards! 9/10, OCG is pretty good to. You must know your cards! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 strange, before i saw this (not saying either of us copied from eachother) I made an "Immortal Angel" archetype set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
£>-ShådøwBøx-<3 Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 Not bad cards, OCG: could be better, and the effex are not that bad, Nice first timers, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.T.B. Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 i think you get a 7/10 pretty good. There needs to be some ocg and like immortal flame the I like picture with a full background. overall pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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