Kouen Nichi Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Rate please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoloa37 Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 ocg is way off track and a 4/10 even though the pic is the time vortex from doctor who. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kouen Nichi Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Point out the OCG errors please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 OCG is actually pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 yeah, the ocg is pretty good, but the part about the "pay 1000 life points" shouldnt be at the end of that sentence where it is, it should either be its own sentence or it should be at the beginning of the next sentence. and the effect is kinda strange, you make a monster your opponent controls be able to attack you directly? i might combo that some how.... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Idea is good stuff, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 A ok card. good job 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kouen Nichi Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 No you make your own monster attack your opponent in his BP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Well, actually, Zoloa is correct...the OCG needs some work, but Zoloa was also alittle too critical...I would have given it a 6/10. Here's a better version of the effect. This card's effect can only be activated during your opponent's Battle Phase. At the cost of 1000 Life Points, select 1 Face-Up monster on your opponent's side of the field. Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the selected monster's ATK. Much more direct version of the effect, sense you are not allowed to attack when it's not your turn...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlargTucker Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 I see OCGs."This card can only be activated during your opponent's Battle Phase. Pay 1000 Life Points. Select 1 monster you control. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the selected monster." This card is interesting, I've never seen anything like that. OCG is what I pointed out, I think that's it. Pic is nice. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kouen Nichi Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 I fixed/changed it a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 very good card, and would be good with the right card combo's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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