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KurashiDragon

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Here goes something I guess. Made a card and I may make more please give some feedback.

 

LegendaryPheonix.jpg

 

0-Do something else in your spare time.

1-Awful. You need a lot of work

2-It's ok but you need practice

3-Keep trying but not bad

4-Not perfect but Awsome

5-Perfect Just perfect.

 

I'll add more at somse point.

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Phenoix should be Phoenix.

 

Wording fix:

 

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 FIRE monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, you can Special Summon as many "Phoenix" monsters as possible from the Graveyard. During the End Phase of the turn this card is sent to the Graveyard, return this card to your hand.

 

There, hope that helped. ^_^

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Ok, in that case, use the following effect ^_^:

 

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 FIRE monsters you control. When this card is Special Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" monster from the Graveyard. During the End Phase of the turn this card is sent to the Graveyard, return this card to your hand.

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Phoenix Nest is REALLY BROKEN, and the image in the original post is dead

Re-upload, please

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 FIRE monsters you control. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, you may Special Summon any monster with "Phoenix" in its name from your graveyard, ignoring any summoning conditions. When this card is sent from the field or your hand to the graveyard, add it to your hand during the End Phase."

 

"While this card remains in play, increase the ATK and DEF of all monsters with "Phoenix" in their name by 300. When a monster with "Phoenix" in its name is sent to the graveyard or removed from play, you may pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon it in Face-up Attack Position to your side of the field or add it to your hand."

 

Corrected OCG, I suggest making the cost for Phoenix Nest WAY WAY higher lol

Since you can apparently activate it at any time, including your opponent's Battle Phase, make it cost a lot. Like, ~1500 Life Points.

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Yes, b0b3rt is seconded.

 

I do have some corrections for his correction, however. First, "you control." needs to be replaced with "on your side of the field." Also, Graveyard is capitalised and face-up is not. It should read either "...Life Points AND Special Summon it in Face-up Attack Position to your side..." or "...Life Points to Special Summon it in Face-up Attack Position ON your side..." (emphasis mine).

 

While I do agree that the LP cost needs to be higher, I suggest making it a separate effect because it is hardly a fair price if you only want to return it to your hand.

 

Otherwise it's a great card and I like that you've used lore in making it/them instead of just using the name. I look forward to seeing more in the near future.

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I have one more card to present (Probly the last one for now because I cant find many pictures of phoenixs.)

 

PerfectPhoenix.jpg

 

Legendary Phoenix + 2 Phoenix Monster

 

This monster is unaffected by your opponents spell and trap cards. This card cannot attack during the turn it is summoned. This monster gains 1000 Attack and defense points for each pheonix card on your side of the field. When this monster destroys a monster in battle half of that monsters attack and defense points are subtracted from your opponents life points.

 

Editing Perfect phoenix

 

I did edit the Phoenix nest.

 

PhoenixNest.jpg

 

Any Phoenix card's attack and defense are brought up by 300. When a Phoenix is sent to the grave or removed from play you can pay 1500 points to place it on the field or 500 to place it in your hand.

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