Bloody Dragon

[Willieh]

 

Effect:

In order to Normal sumon this monster, you must sacrifice 3 face up DARK type monsters, and offer 2000 of your Life Points. When this monster is summoned, all face-up LIGHT type monsters are destroyed. If this monster attacks a monster in defense position, damage equal to the difference of this monster's ATK and that monster's DEF is done to your opponet's Life Points. You can special summon this monster from your graveyard by sending 3 DARK type monsters from your hand or deck to the graveyard.

 

This is the final version, based on constructive criticism.

still, give me your opinion.

 

Oh yeah and i dont own the artwork.

[Wyhe]

Modify your OCG,it's very confusing like that.

[Willieh]

Modify your OCG' date='it's very confusing like that.

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I'll do that later :D

[krangganboy]

yay

this a cool card :shock:

[wizardology]

You are definitely right about the OCG problem; it hurts my eyes! Also, with 4500 ATK/DEF and all those powerful effects theres no way LP and 2 Tributes is going to do it. I'll correct it here with the essential addition before I continue:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 monsters. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with its own effect. When this card is Summoned, pay half your Life Points and destroy all LIGHT monsters on the field. When this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, both players remove from play all Monster Cards in their hand and draw cards from their deck equal to the number of cards removed from play by this card's effect. When this card is in the Graveyard, you can Tribute 3 DARK monsters on your side of the field to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position.

 

I took out the whole face-down part because it's not really possible that way. However, it's still not really balanced. I would recommend making it's ATK no more than 4000 and it's DEF no more than 3000.

 

Still not enough though, and this can be fixed by changing the LP cost to a set amount (because what if someone only has 100 LP left? It would hardly be fair). I suggest between 1000 and 2000 (if it's 2000 than NO ONE should question the balance).

 

With these changes implemented the card is as good as perfect. On a positive note, I like the idea behind it, and the card in question could be part of some very interesting combinations. ;)

[Willieh]

Thanks man, really helpful post. I'll take your advice.

[Senbanzakura]

Nice card, very interesting. The OCG kinda gives me a head ache after i read it but it seems you got some good advice on how to change it

7/10 Keep up the good work your getting better :D

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Holo effect is alright.

[Professor Cobra]

Overpowered, take out the LIGHT monster destruction effect, lower ATK to 3500, reduce Life Point cost to 500. 4/10

[Lexeaus]

awsome card

tad OP

are your pics off google?

[Willieh]

awsome card

tad OP

are your pics off google?

 

Yes, i just typed in bloody dragon (like i always do, just type in the name of my card) and see if a good result comes up.

[Blue Lightning]

Its good but you should lower the attack to 3000-3300. I like the effects alot and the summoning condition isnt as hard as some other monsters. 8/10