Lexeaus Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 hope the card appears Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 i wish it didnt appear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 What's this? Another overpowered pointless card without a disclaimer? Clariex, LOL at your post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 If this card was good then I would be gay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Well seeing as no one else can give a shred of helpful advice.Your card has a effect, yet it it's not a effect monster.Also i wouldn't make it a "Divine Beast" Also your effect isAbsurd. And for the level of the card, itshould require some Special summon. The OCG Is very bad.The pic isn't good at all either. There are things you need to changePretty much everything except the name, but when ever somegives you criticism that might help you, never take it as a insult.But i would review the whole card, if you were to look at a card you own, read a bunch and you might get the feel on how to word things better, but this card in particularwould never make TCG standards. Keep tryingI can't rate this card well sorry. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 This card fails epicly. -0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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