tommers2008 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 this is my new fusion please tel me what you think..!!please feel free to tell me where i need to improve and rate if its not 2 much trouble thanks..!!disclaimer: i do not own this artwork or do not claim ownership of this artwork it is from unknown artists at deviant art.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 You capitalised the wrong things. Card is not capitalised, but you need capitals in the name! 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 UMMM... Capitalization? You don't capitalize "card" but other than that, "OK" OCG. And the bottom card needs a bigger image. otherwise 8/15 EDIT: The fusion doesn't add up, the card has a phoenix in the background but has a dragon needed to summon. The last effect doesn't make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 cool card dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 yes i sorry made the mistake with card i have that card wrote out with while but only newly added pic..!!!could ye tell me what ye mean by capitalisation..!!! ah thanks for your comments neway..!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Things like the first letter of the name, or the type of the monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 yea ok thanks i will change them later im a bit busy on other cards now so i will do it later..!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 You got it down and everything, just relaying it wrong, good effort! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Effects needed for normal monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 regardless of power limitations, you must never make a 9-star out of two 4-stars.Make [at least one of] the vanillas effect monsters, and change your fusion to a 5 or 6-star, changing its stats and effect accordingly. Your OCG is also in need of revising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 5/10 , can't really call it bad but then again you can't call it good. however what can be called good is your effort, keep making cards and gaining experience in the art of card crafting.apologies for edit, computer hardrive corrupted, using a laptop not very familiar with it yet lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 always capitalize in the name and race...otherwise u really need a better name u didnt do anything for name u just took 2 word from every monsters lol u should make a new name. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 don't put capitals on everything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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