cameronsdog Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 heres a new card i hope you like it this is my first card. please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Spelling, ocg, OP. cool pic and it's your 1st try though so: 5/10.Keep working on it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 The card pic is really coolI His level is waaaay to high for the rest of the card.for 5000 ATK, make him a 10 star of 9 star monster :DAlso you might try this to re word him:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This cardcan only be Special Summoned by the effect of"Human Sacrifice"When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle,send all of your opponents cards from the field to the graveyard. Something along those lines, I'm not great at the OCG yet myself, but try something like that, I'm sure a more advance member can word it better XP Good try though, 6/10 for this card :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eric234 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 cool card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Spelled Chaos wrong. Overused pic. Few OCG errors. But alright for your first card. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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