laxar Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 I got some Zombie-Type monsters at home and i like the type.Buit with these onces it whould be perfect to my deck :P I did find nice pics on internet so i was thinking... why not use them as images to the yugioh cards? :DHope you enjoy them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zain_reddevil Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 not bad 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Thx... i am no good doing cards :(but the thing is that it is funny! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 wtf is this???? 1st mistake: they dont say must remain in attack positon until this card is out they say until its destroyed. 2nd mistake: they dont say:all other cards get 400 lesser ATK points, they say: all non-zombie type monsters ATK points get decreased by not lesser wtf is lesser even a word??. 3rd mistake: you can tribute other zombies to higher the ATK..wats higher?? wats with u?? they say: u can tribute other zombies on the field to increase not higher!. 4th mistake: in the 2nd card u said this card can only be summoned while the land of lost souls is on the field u should say like this "The land of the lost souls". 5th mistake:u said while the land of the lost souls are on te field..wats with the are? its only 1 card u should say: while the land of the lost souls IS on the field. 6th mistake: u said this card can attack ur opponents life points direktly wats with the k?its directly. 7th mistake: u said but only damage with half his ATK points..u should say: u can half this monster's ATK points to make it attack ur opponents LP directly. 8th mistake: u didnt specify wen u half is ATK points does it stays 4 ever or for that turn. the truth is..the only good stuff r the pics and the name only 0/10. soz man but....U STINK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 what did i say before?I SUCK doing cards and second...Who cares? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 what did i say before?I SUCK doing cards and second...Who cares? XD People who read your cards care.People that want you to become better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 It might be true your cards aren't up to OCG Standards, but keep on practicing.Practice makes perfect. These cards have a good idea but lack structure, Re view them,read some cards you own and get a better feel for them :DAgain I'm not perfect. Keep trying ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 oh... well then i understand :S i'm an idiot! :(LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2sick4u Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Seriously.Dude.Belittling yourself for pity on your cards is pathetic.Your cards are pathetic. Grr. So far, your pathetic.If no serious attempt was made, why the hell would you post them were people rate with serious intent?Simple. You know your cards suck, and you want to be proven otherwise.Good news, sunshine; (Remember the titans for the world..) It won't happen for a long while.2/10.2sick~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 They're not TOO bad. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 oh... well then i understand :S i'm an idiot! :(LOL Study the cards from PTDN, LOTD, SDDE, TDGS, and even a bit of Crossroads of Chaos. Use the wording shown on cards from those sets and your cards will be dramatically better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 It's a good card,but there's quite a lot OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 OCG errors. Random spaces in the card. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 ocg is pretty bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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