Luna Diviner Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Prologue Thursday 5th July 1998.The streets of Mallony City were packed with small children out in the streets playing games. Mallony City was normally a peaceful place, no serious crimes have been committed for over 20 years but anything can happen and something WILL happen."Kick the ball to me!" asked the little boy. "OK!” the taller and much larger boy stepped back, preparing to kick the ball to the boy. The ball was in the air, seconds away from reaching the boy.A car accelerated and swerved out of control, the larger boy ran out of the way but the little boy was frozen in fear, the car couldn't stop.The driver opened the door to see who was hit, he ran forward and leaned over to see the boy's bloody face, "Son?" cried the man. The boy did not reply and began to close his eyes. Wednesday 19th of November 2008.A tall darkly dressed man was in his room packing his clothes and belongings into a bag, getting ready to go into a large coach. "Sorry Kane, but your 18 and that means your too old to come. You're to old for this care home,” proclaimed the old man. "But, I don't even know my family, my real name? At least let me stay until I find out,” replied Kane "You've been here for 10 years. Go out into the world and make a living. It doesn't matter what your name is or who your family are. It's who you are that counts!" there was a strange sound resounding from the man’s previous sentence, who was Kane? Or WHAT was Kane? ____________________________________CharactersName : Kane (Given name not true name.)Age : 18Appearance : Bio : ???______________________________________(Sorry for having no info on Kane but most of his past is hidden)._______________________________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 i think you should put a PG-13 on this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 People have really started to write this kind of fanfics after I posted Predetermined. ^^ But still, very good with all the descriptions and such. Feel free to continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dart dude911 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 i want to post my cards, i cant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 People have really started to write this kind of fanfics after I posted Predetermined. ^^ But still' date=' very good with all the descriptions and such. Feel free to continue.[/quote']I have never heard of that ff.I got the idea from ff.net.Dary Dude that is spam. This will be a bit wacky/wild but still to the point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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