Legate Trio.

[Sionnach]

A trio of synergetic monsters.

 

 

Lyuanmrah the Aphotic Legate

DARK/Warrior/7/2800/1600

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by selecting 1 monster in the Graveyard and Special Summoning it to your opponent's side of the field. That monster cannot attack or be declared as an attack target. Your monsters cannot attack directly while your opponent controls that monster. When it is removed from the field, Set this card.

 

Dalkezarch the Gateway Legate

WIND/Thunder/7/1900/2200

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 opponent's Attack Position monster that did not attack last turn to the bottom of its owner's Deck. When this card is Summoned, you can reveal 1 face-down card on your side of the field and add it to your hand. If it was a Monster Card, increase this card's ATK by half of its ATK. If it was a Spell Card, remove from play monsters this card destroys by battle.

 

Nietsaei the Sacrosanct Legate

LIGHT/Fairy/7/1600/2400

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by returning 1 of your opponent's removed from play monsters to their hand. Your opponent then draws 1 card. When this card is Summoned, reveal the bottom card of your opponent's Deck. If it is a Monster Card, it is Special Summoned to your side of the field. You gain control of that monster until the end of the duel. If it is not a Monster Card, you can flip 1 face-down monster on the field face-up.

 

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[╬「Selatcia」╬]

I like these. I would raise the level of the 1st card by 1 star and lower the level of the 3rd card by 1 star. 9/10

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

I'm confused by Lyanmrah's last sentence, do you mean to flip it face-down when the monster you Special Summoned from your Graveyard to the opponent's side of the field, if so, change it to "when the monster Special Summoned by this card's effect is removed from the field, flip this card into face-down Defense Position." Also, don't refer to the monster you Special Summoned as "that monster." Refer to it as "the monster Special Summoned by this card's effect.

 

Very well done for a new member, hope to see more from you.

[Skyson]

Fsdgdsfsgsd. You're too good. The synergy (obviously) is incredibly well thought out. Having all three of them at once would be sickening. There should be something on the last one that lets you Special Summon a monster from your hand by doing something, since Dalkezarch would return Lyuanmrah to your hand for its ATK gain. Then again, you could just summon it again. Now you need a monster that you put in your Graveyard to use an effect that does something to the controller of the card, to have a bit of synergy with Lyuanmrah's effect, though if you have the full trio you'll be putting it on the bottom of their Deck anyway.

 

 

Very good work. I like all of them. 10/10 definitely.

[odin557]

Words cannot describe how much I like these cards.

101/100!

[RacecaR]

7.5/10.

[tonisanoob]

the first 2 are good, i think they could be a little more powerd up as ykno these are reaaly underpowerd for being secret rare -.-

 

also the last one sucks your plus 2ing your opponent GREEEEEEEAT move

[Apocolypse]

You did OK, 8.5/10

[Sionnach]

the first 2 are good' date=' i think they could be a little more powerd up as ykno these are reaaly underpowerd for being secret rare -.-

 

also the last one sucks your plus 2ing your opponent GREEEEEEEAT move

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Being "secret rare" has nothing to do with how good a card is. I only added holofoil to them because I felt like making them look good.

 

The last one +2's the opponent, and in return you have the possibility of Summoning 3 monsters in the same turn. Sacrosanct is a Light, so slap on Guardian of Order and you've got 4 monsters on the field in one turn with no direct costs to pay yourself other than losing cards from your hand. Also, combined with the other two, for example if you have Lyuan on the field, Dalkez in your hand, and a random beatstick like Darklord Zerato Special Summoned with Lyuan's effect, Niet becomes pretty good.

 

Just going with that situation, I send Darklord to the bottom of the deck, flip Lyuan face-down, Special Summon Dalkez, return Lyuan to my hand, Dalkez becomes 3300 ATK. Special Summon Lyuan again, target and Special Summon another generic beatstick in the Graveyard. Assuming that my opponent is running a Dark deck with cards removed from play, I then Special Summon Nietsaei from my hand, taking control of Darklord Zerato for the rest of the duel. Dark monsters are the most common attribute in the game. If I happen to have one in my hand, I'd discard it to Raigeki my opponent's field and flip Lyuan face-down, or just use some removal. 3300 + 1600 + 2800 = 7700. Normal Summon something with at least 300 ATK and that's game.

 

That's only a random good-case scenario. These cards are meant to be synergetic, not super-awesome on their own, and with their effects working together to take control of the opponent's monsters rather than become focused on ultra fast OTKs, hence all the drawbacks.

[White Devil]

Nice cards, mouth is still opened, can't breath, 10/10 ^_^