laxar Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Rate plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Certified-Immortal Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Very Nice This Is My First Rating So yeah But I Must Say Very Nice And Where Did You Get The Images? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Nice of you to ask... i did get them on a site called Google. Thanks for the rate btw ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2sick4u Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Okay; For your ritual monster, you'd want to add "as a tribute" to "from your side of the field." I think. >_>.Also, instead of "this battle phase" I believe it's "during the same battle phase" With capital's inserted where necessary. Oh, almost missed it.Your spelling of except: exept. Correct: except. But in all honesty..A) You've picked a heavily used type of card, being demonic. The unoriginality factor shines out any shine your cards could of produced. Demons, are, dare I say, more over-made than dragons.B) Your effect is hardly original, and overpowering, since all decks are theme based; and hey, combine this with a bit of raviel magic, and you've got an insta-win. (since both can be special summoned, it's rather easy.)Oh yeah, It's not "offering one card from your hand", It's "discarding one card from your hand."As with all my corrections, I'm not 100% accurate..But oh well ^__^.6/10.2sick~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 well... thanks (i think) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I think you posted this thread already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 OCG errors. Bad Pics. Somewhat balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Don't post a thread twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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