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Senbanzakura Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Pretty cool. OCG is maybe a tad off, but still cool idea, I will give you a 8/10 For your first card. Keep up the good work, you canalways get better :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Pretty cool. OCG is maybe a tad off, but still cool idea, I will give you a 8/10 For your first card. Keep up the good work, you canalways get better :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Pretty cool. OCG is maybe a tad off, but still cool idea, I will give you a 8/10 For your first card. Keep up the good work, you canalways get better :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 what "Senbanzakura" said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 what "Senbanzakura" said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 what "Senbanzakura" said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
splatt Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Old text: "If you use DARK Monsters as tributes to Normal Summon this card, remove from play all DARK Monsters in your Deck." -Well this effect could work wonders for a Dark Emperor Structure Deck but removing that many monsters FROM YOUR DECK may, just may, cause you to lose the duel, especially if all the monsters you have in your deck are DARK. I would suggest removing all DARK monsters from your graveyard instead. New text: "If you Normal Summon this card using DARK Monsters, remove from play all DARK Monsters from your graveyard." ____________________________________________________________ Old text: "Select 1 Monster that is removed from play, inflict damage equal to the selected Monster's Level x 300. If you use this effect, you cannot attack for 2 turns" -This is a good effect but you should change a few things. First, you should change the amount of damage, right now a 7 Level monster will do 2100 damage. That's quite a lot for 1 effect so it should be changed to x 200. Second, not being able to attack for 2 turns is a huge cost. That should read something like this: "If you use this effect this turn, this card cannot attack your opponent directly." This way you can still attack, but not with this card (directly). New text: "Once per turn, you can select 1 Monster that is removed from play, inflict damage equal to the selected Monster's Level x 200. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack your opponent directly for this turn. Original Rating: 8/10 New Rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
splatt Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Old text: "If you use DARK Monsters as tributes to Normal Summon this card, remove from play all DARK Monsters in your Deck." -Well this effect could work wonders for a Dark Emperor Structure Deck but removing that many monsters FROM YOUR DECK may, just may, cause you to lose the duel, especially if all the monsters you have in your deck are DARK. I would suggest removing all DARK monsters from your graveyard instead. New text: "If you Normal Summon this card using DARK Monsters, remove from play all DARK Monsters from your graveyard." ____________________________________________________________ Old text: "Select 1 Monster that is removed from play, inflict damage equal to the selected Monster's Level x 300. If you use this effect, you cannot attack for 2 turns" -This is a good effect but you should change a few things. First, you should change the amount of damage, right now a 7 Level monster will do 2100 damage. That's quite a lot for 1 effect so it should be changed to x 200. Second, not being able to attack for 2 turns is a huge cost. That should read something like this: "If you use this effect this turn, this card cannot attack your opponent directly." This way you can still attack, but not with this card (directly). New text: "Once per turn, you can select 1 Monster that is removed from play, inflict damage equal to the selected Monster's Level x 200. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack your opponent directly for this turn. Original Rating: 8/10 New Rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
splatt Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Old text: "If you use DARK Monsters as tributes to Normal Summon this card, remove from play all DARK Monsters in your Deck." -Well this effect could work wonders for a Dark Emperor Structure Deck but removing that many monsters FROM YOUR DECK may, just may, cause you to lose the duel, especially if all the monsters you have in your deck are DARK. I would suggest removing all DARK monsters from your graveyard instead. New text: "If you Normal Summon this card using DARK Monsters, remove from play all DARK Monsters from your graveyard." ____________________________________________________________ Old text: "Select 1 Monster that is removed from play, inflict damage equal to the selected Monster's Level x 300. If you use this effect, you cannot attack for 2 turns" -This is a good effect but you should change a few things. First, you should change the amount of damage, right now a 7 Level monster will do 2100 damage. That's quite a lot for 1 effect so it should be changed to x 200. Second, not being able to attack for 2 turns is a huge cost. That should read something like this: "If you use this effect this turn, this card cannot attack your opponent directly." This way you can still attack, but not with this card (directly). New text: "Once per turn, you can select 1 Monster that is removed from play, inflict damage equal to the selected Monster's Level x 200. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack your opponent directly for this turn. Original Rating: 8/10 New Rating: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattcormack Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I think this card is cool and I think the effect is good but it should only not be able to attack for the turn the effect if used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattcormack Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I think this card is cool and I think the effect is good but it should only not be able to attack for the turn the effect if used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattcormack Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I think this card is cool and I think the effect is good but it should only not be able to attack for the turn the effect if used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 I like the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 I like the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 I like the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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