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hey, are you still looking for fellow reviewers?

 

If so, I could do that. ^_^

 

I am always fair, and I think objectively.

 

Those two things lead to the fairest of outcomes. ^_^

 

If I could be one of those two reviewers you want, that would be so nice.

 

Thanks,

-Kale

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[/b]Application Card

 

Sbamber's application card is quite interesting, he has thankfully follow the application rules and posted a card he has never posted yet.

 

For the name: Dead Archer...It does fit very well with the card, but is alittle too cliche and a 5 year old could have come up with a better name.

 

Picture: It is good, it has a good render and a good BG, also fits the card well.

 

Effect: I am actually unsure about the OCG so I shall not count it off. As for the effect itself, it allows you to draw 5 cards, as long as you take the first 5 cards from your deck and send them to the graveyard, now I can see a poctive on both sides of this...5 cards to the Graveyard means you can set up a combo if the correct cards are in the graveyard, like the five pieces of exodia, which I doubt would happen in one trial with this card. But the other side is that if you draw a spell or trap card on the second set to be placed in your hand, this card can attack directly for that turn. If you draw the spell card "Contract With Exodia" you can get Exodia Necross Out there really quickly, though not really recommended, I'm just thinking of the first combo that pops into my head. Even if the combo can be very very very slim at chance.

 

Anyway, it's effect is very unique and well balanced, sense you loose 5 cards to gain 5 cards into your hand.

 

Rating::::

Name: 1/2 (It fits the card, just isn't that interesting.)

Picture: 2/2 (Fits the card, great render, great BG, not overused.)

Effect: 5/6 (Sense I'm not counting on OCG for this one sense I am unsure about it, it is well balanced and can be used to set up great Graveyard Combos, just isn't reccomended to use.)

 

Overall: 8/10. (Great Effort, and Great Time...I can see you really tried.)

 

 

---As promised, you have made an 8/10...Welcome Sbamber as our first Reviewer, as for your obligation, I want you to review poke123's card "Heart of the Cards." And also, as promised, you shall receave a reputation for being selected as a card reviewer...Congratulations.

 

Kale: I will get to you in a moment.

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Rate card pwease?

Hehehe heart of the cards! ^^ image is from wolf's art collection.

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it's a last resort weapon.

 

This card is first to be reviewed, so we will see...

 

For the Name: It is bland, anybody could have come up with this, but yes it matches the picture.

 

The Picture: It totally matches the name, as said above, but it is slightly blury...

 

The Effect: I personally don't like the Effect... It has you draw 3 cards and then you show your oppenent... OK, fine. but then as you progress you place them into your deck, and shuffle. Seems fine. But after that, it crashes... after you shuffle you pick up up three cards, and if they arn't the ones you picked before you loss 2000 Life Points, what are the odd you will pick up the same cards, 3/60! Really hard. The OCG asspect was fairly OK, Some mess ups,, Life Points, opponent, shuffle, hand, monsters, these are just some

 

Overall Rating:

 

Name: 1/2

Picture: 1/2

Effect: 4/6

Overall: 7/10

 

I see potential in you, keep it up!

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Alright..In the mean time...Kale: You must remember that your application card must be brand new' date=' and never had been posted anywhere else on the forum...I can find out very easily. And you must make atleast an 8/10 on my scale.

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*salute*

 

Alright. ^_^

 

I wasnt planning on recycling any cards either...

 

Most of my good ones are my Allies anywho....

 

Would you mind if the brand new card was an Ally card? It doesn't have to be, so if you say no I am not affected either way.

 

I will post my card tomorrow, I can not do it today. ^_^

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well, an Ally Monster is a new type (like fusion, ritual, synchro, etc) and it has a black card border.

 

They can't actually be used in the game because they dont technically exist, but the thread me and Ryan are working on has some rules that are, if I may say, awesome, and they could just be lumped into actual gameplay and work.

 

The deal with them is that they stack on top of each other. ^_^

 

But I can make an actual card if you want something other than Ally stuff...

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Cyber Nega Dragon

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Artist : "TB-Samurai" on Deviantart.

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This monster can only be Selected as a monster to be Summoned while you have a "Cyber Dragon" equipped with "Negative Cyber" on your side of the field. Send that monster to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card. While this card is under your control, it's name is treated as "Cyber Nega Dragon". Once per turn, Select 3 monsters, the Selected monsters cannot choose any monster's on your side's of the field as a Attack Target, until this card is removed from the field.

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My application. Hope you like it.

 

[spoiler=Application Card]

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effect:

This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by it's own effect. When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you can remove this card from play during the End Phase. During your Main Phase 2, if this card is removed from play due to its own effect, then you can Special Summon it to activate 1 of the following effects: ● Inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent. ● Destroy 1 card on the field. Your opponent then draws 1 card.

 

 

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My application. Hope you like it.

 

[spoiler=Application Card]

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effect:

This card cannot be Special Summoned' date=' except by it's own effect. When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you can remove this card from play during the End Phase. During your Main Phase 2, if this card is removed from play due to its own effect, then you can Special Summon it to activate 1 of the following effects: ● Inflict 700 points of damage to your opponent. ● Destroy 1 card on the field. Your opponent then draws 1 card.

 

 

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Application Card

 

And now...To review another application card. This time, a card made by Kale.

 

Name: Very interesting, makes me want to know more about the card and if there are other "Deserter Knight" cards on the map. It also has a nice ring to it, and it fits well with the card,

 

Picture: It's good, it's got great detail, great render and great BG. Fits the card's name well, and it gives an appealing tone to it.

 

Effect: Here's where most cards fall out of place.

Alright, to begin, I have 1 word to say about it's effect. "Overpowered." It may be only Specialsummonable through it's own effect, but it can still be Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned. And it may be tossed out of play at the end phase during the turn it's summoned, but that's where things get really bad for your opponent. It can be Special Summoned from out of play if it was sent out of play by it's own effect, and when you do Special Summon it, you can either add 700 to it's ATK or destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field, and then have your opponent draw 1 card. Either way you look at it, you're still doing harm to your opponent, even if your opponent doesn't realize that by letting him draw a card after you destroy one with this card's second chioce effect, you're cutting down his deck closer to 0 cards for a draw, so it's really an aggrocard, and a very devistating one too, because at the end of your turn,. it's sent out of play again, to be Special Summoned again for your next turn.

 

Rating:::

Name: 2/2 (Interesting and Gives a nice ring to it)

Picture: 2/2 (Unique, fits well with the card, and also gives a rather fitting tone to the card)

Effect: 5/6 (Great OCG, unique effect, just overpowered as it can happen over and over again, making a very annoying aggrocard.)

 

Overall: 9/10 (Great Effort, I can see you have definately took your time in making this card. Just needed to give it more balance)

 

---Congratulations Kale, for making our last and final Reviewer. As your Obligatory task, you shall review Code Y.C.M.'s Cyber Nega Dragon. Good Luck..and do your Best

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thank you Soharta San Meti for selecting me!

 

alright, now onto the review:

 

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[spoiler=card review. it was too long...]

Code Y.C.M:

 

Cyber Nega Dragon:

 

Name:

its alright for a name, but not the greatest. Cyber Nega Dragon looks like you meant to write Cyber 'Mega' Dragon, but accidentally wrote it wrong...

 

It doesnt blend with the effect really either.... But that is only my opinion.

 

I realize why you chose the name, because it fits with the 'negative cyber' card, but since it doesnt seem to fit to me i will subtract 1 point.

 

1/2

 

Picture:

To me the picture is kinda wierd O.o but it sure does look like Cyber Dragon. ^_^

 

its a bit to cartoonish for my taste in yugioh cards, and i feel that it would have looked loads better without the holo effect, that looks like a very nice red background you have already. ^_^

 

for those reasons, i must subtract 1 point.

 

1/2

 

Effect:

The OCG is kinda off on this card. for example:

 

"This monster can only be Selected as a monster to be Summoned while you have a "Cyber Dragon" equipped with "Negative Cyber" on your side of the field. Send that monster to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card."

 

this should be written:

 

"This monster can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 'Cyber Dragon' equipped with 1 'Negative Cyber" that you control to the Graveyard."

 

that may not be perfect (what i wrote) but it still gets the point that is needed across, and it takes up less space. I condensed what you said in two sentences down to one.

 

and this line:

 

"While this card is under your control, it's name is treated as "Cyber Nega Dragon"."

 

isnt even needed. It is 'Cyber Nega Dragon', while it is on the field it is a given that its name is treated as itself...

 

the only reasons i can think of that you would need this line is if your card was like Proto-Cyber Dragon where it gets treated as something else, where yours doesnt, or

 

you have something else in your set that would automatically change this cards name while it is on the field.

 

since i havnt seen your set, i cannot just assume that is the case.

 

this line:

 

'Once per turn, Select 3 monsters, the Selected monsters cannot choose any monster's on your side's of the field as a Attack Target, until this card is removed from the field.'

 

you need to take out the " 's " on side's, because it is a grammAr error. and change the following " a " to " an " for the same reason.

 

This line is the effect, and the effect part makes the card overpowered.

 

3 monsters per turn cannot attack your monsters? i would take 3 monsters when summoned, but with this each turn you can select 3 new monsters that cannot select a target to attack....

 

that in itself is overpowered, no matter how hard it is to get a Cyber Dragon equipped with a Negative Cyber....

 

so for the grammAr and overpoweredness, i will subtract 2 more points.

 

4/6

 

total: 6/10.

 

=not a bad card, but not an awesome card yet. Just below average at the moment.

 

If you fixed the errors in the grammAr and OCG, then i would rate it a 7, making it average. ^_^

 

but please, dont let my card review discourage you from making cards. After all, this is supposed to be fun, and this is only one man's honest opinion of one card that you have made.

 

 

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Great Job...Alright...I shall also provide my two Felow Reviewers tasks if they are not reviewing any cards. In this case...I shall I will have them review some of my cards, so that they have something to do, to keep this thread alive, and to give them some practice.

 

It will be acceptable if more than one reviewer reviews the same card, it would mean different opinions and much more help for the card's actual owner.

 

But for the time being, I would really like some more people to post their cards for reviews.

 

Also, in the case that I have nothing to do, I will choose a card from another thread that I really lke and review it. So sometimes it'll be unexpected. lol

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Yes, if they request a certain reviewer, then only that reviewer can review the card. If they do not request, then we are all at equal liberty.

 

Plus, As for now...sense there's nothing to do...I want you and Sbamber both to review card of mine...You will both review the same card...The member card I made for Icyblue...See what you can do...Notify Sbamber about this please..

 

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When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, select 1 DARK or LIGHT level 6 or higher monster from your Graveyard. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by the half of the ATK of the selected monster. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard by battle, you may pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon the selected monster from the Graveyard in Face-Up Attack Position. The selected monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly as long as this card remains in your Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases that this card is in your Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Soharta" token in Face-Up Defence Position. (Level 1/DARK/Fiend-Type/ATK 250/DEF 100) You may tribute 3 "Soharta" tokens to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your Main Phase 1.

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