Careless Whisper Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Bump...I need cards to review!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Yes' date=' if they request a certain reviewer, then only that reviewer can review the card. If they do not request, then we are all at equal liberty. Plus, As for now...sense there's nothing to do...I want you and Sbamber both to review card of mine...You will both review the same card...The member card I made for Icyblue...See what you can do...Notify Sbamber about this please.. [img']http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/4410/39794zj3.jpg[/img]When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, select 1 DARK or LIGHT level 6 or higher monster from your Graveyard. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by the half of the ATK of the selected monster. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard by battle, you may pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon the selected monster from the Graveyard in Face-Up Attack Position. The selected monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly as long as this card remains in your Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases that this card is in your Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Soharta" token in Face-Up Defence Position. (Level 1/DARK/Fiend-Type/ATK 250/DEF 100) You may tribute 3 "Soharta" tokens to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your Main Phase 1. OK, I'm reviewing it! Picture: Nice, not a good BG though, doesn't really match name either. Name: It is a great name! "San-Icy" I like it! "Viero" is nice, and put together is makes it sound cool Effect: Very complex effect, which makes the card have a better appeal. But you have 2 minor OCG errors you said "Face-Up" it is "face-up" 1 small puncuation error but that doesn't bother me. The overall effect is good. It has you Special Summon the card from your graveyard. and select a Dark or Light attribute monster. the increasing the ATK by half of the ATK of the selected card is great. Ratings:Picture: 1/2Name: 2/2Effect: 5/6Overall: 8/10 This card is very nice. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Nice review...Now,...For Kale...Also, Need more cards to review!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 I never had a card reviewed before, can you review my first ritual card I made,I has received some good reviews so I thought I'd have it reviewed futher. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell, "Death to the Skies". This card cannot attack if there are no other face-up Zombie-type monsters on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you may remove 2 Zombie-type monsters on your side of the field from play to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot attack during your next Battle Phase after this card's effect was activated. I can post the spell card too if you'd like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell' date=' "Death to the Skies". This card cannot attack if there are no other face-up Zombie-type monsters on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you may remove 2 Zombie-type monsters on your side of the field from play to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot attack during your next Battle Phase after this card's effect was activated.[/quote'] New Review: Name: "Grave Conqueror the Ghost of the Sky." Interesting, fits well, but too long. I would have settled for "Ghost of the Sky" alone, but whatever floats your boat, even if it sinks mine. Picture: Fits the card well, good BG, and good Render. Effect: Ritual Cards are usually hard to word correctly, but you actually did pretty good. You have good OCG, and good Balance...The only thing missing is the Ritual Summoning Conditions..Which is supposed to be on both the Ritual Monster and the Ritual Spell. Rating::::Name: 1.5/2 (It fits well and is interesting, just too long.Picture: 2/2 (Great BG and Render, and it fits the card well.)Effect: 5/6 (The lack of the Ritual Summoning Conditions brings it this far down because it's extremely important.) Overall::7.5/10 (Great Effort, hope to see some more cards coming from you.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 thanks,I thought the requirements were,but I looke dup lycan thrope and the requirements aren't on the card so I assumed it didn't need to be there. I edited the card,here's the final product(all I did was add the new name and the summoning requirements): so do you think it's better now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 my card got skipped...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 Yes....I can skip cards. It's my descision, if the other card reviewers don't want to review it, then so be it. WE probably just thought it was too simple to review. We are sorry, but please don't be angry with us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 bump... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 I think i have alot of OCG errors on this cardcould you guys help correct itarigato! http://i30.tinypic.com/32zm3a8.jpg' alt='32zm3a8.jpg'>[align=justify]This card can only be activated by removing from play 5 monsters with an ATK of 1000 or less and only when you control a monster with an ATK of 1000 or less. Discard 1 card from you hand or send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard to activate 1 of the following effects based on the action you took.● If you sent card's from the tops of your Deck to the Graveyard, increase the ATK of all monsters you control with an ATK of 1000 or less by 1000.● If you discarded 1 card from your hand, you can change the Battle Position of all monsters with an ATK of 1000 or less twice during the same turn. You can only change the Battle Position of a monster that has declared an attack this turn.[/align] you can choose either one, i dont mind, i would just like 1 or the other reviewedplease and thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 I will rate it tomorrow when I am finally able to get out of the Hospital...I promise...I already wrote it under my notes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Sorry for 2x Posting. [justify]Negate the activation of a Trap Card that targets a monster you control with an ATK of 1000 or less and destroy it. If you control only 1 monster during the resolution of this card's effect' date=' treat this card as an Equip Spell Card and equip it to the monster. The equipped monster cannot be selected as an Attack target and is unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards. During the 3rd End Phase after this card was equipped to a monster, destroy it and increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 1000 until the End Phase of the turn.[/justify'] Gphaku's "You Promised to Protect Me." Name: Already it's very deep, and it gives me a clear idea about what's going on. It makes me want to know what exactly the card can do, and it's very unique. Picture: I'm not sure if it fits, but I do like it. It has the mood intensified with such a sad and lonely little face upon it. Effect: It's got a very unexpected twist to it...At first, when looking at the name of the card, you think imediately that this will effect your opponent's side of the field, like make one of their monsters be destroyed. But, it's very different. Instead, this card negates an attack against one of your monsters with 1000 ATK or lower. And if you have 1 monster after this card's first effect is resolved, this card becomes an equip card, protecting the monster from attack, and effect from magic and trap. Then, after 3 turns, this card is destroyed and you increase the monster's ATK, the one it was equiped to, by 1000 until the end of that 3rd turn. The OCG is nice, and the effect is very unique, but I must say a tad overpowered. Rating::::Name: 2/2Picture: 1.5/2Effect: 5/6 Overall: 8.5/10 Very nice job, I see alot of time was put into this card. _________________________________________________________ Now, I have a chore for Sbamber, if he is still active in this.... He shall rate Gphaku's second card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 [align=justify]This card can only be activated by removing from play 5 monsters with an ATK of 1000 or less and only when you control a monster with an ATK of 1000 or less. Discard 1 card from you hand or send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard to activate 1 of the following effects based on the action you took.● If you sent card's from the tops of your Deck to the Graveyard' date=' increase the ATK of all monsters you control with an ATK of 1000 or less by 1000.● If you discarded 1 card from your hand, you can change the Battle Position of all monsters with an ATK of 1000 or less twice during the same turn. You can only change the Battle Position of a monster that has declared an attack this turn.[/align'] you can choose either one, i dont mind, i would just like 1 or the other reviewedplease and thank you Well tthis is a good card Picture: Very good, nice quality, matches the name Name: Matches the pic, and is very original Effect; You have to remove from play 5 cards, but from you hand or field? both effects are nice, i like the first one. I'm now going to rate this card Picture: 2/2Name: 2/2Effect: 4/6Overall: 8/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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