Oxys Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 This is my first set made, any corrections for the card effects etc. are welcome. First up, the box art XD. This set is based on monsters with the name Nightmare in them, spells, and traps will involve the Nightmare monsters etc. The set should holdabout 20 or so cards, it's not very big. Here are three cards that are in the set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Altar of Maveliance". When this card is special summoned to the field, destroy all monsters on the field with "Nightmare" in their name except this card. For each card with "Nightmare" in your graveyard, increase the ATK points of this card by 200. This card is destroyed at the end of your third Standby Phase. When this card is Special Summoned, or Normal Summoned Treat this card as an Equip Spell Card, and Equip it to one of your Opponent's Monsters. The equipped Monster cannot be removed from the Field. If this card is sent from the Field to the Graveyard by a Card Effect, and is equipped to one of your Opponent's Monsters, remove that Monster from play along with this card. Discard one card from your hand, then place from your deck to your hand one monster card with Nightmare in it's name. Additional Cards - These cards are also in the set. When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon one Doom Spirit from your Hand or Deck. If you Special Summon one from your deck, you must pay 500 Life Points. When this card is removed from the field, it is instead shuffled into the deck. (Battle Damage applies during battle if this card is destroyed) Pay 1000 Life Points, if there are three or more Doom Spirits on either side of the Field, Tribute them to summon any monster with Nightmare in it's name from your hand to the field. The monster cannot attack the turn it was summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Doom Spirit Tribute". When this card is Special Summoned, all monsters on your opponents side of the field are switched to Face-Down Defense Position. When this card destroys a monster in Defense Position, destroy the monster immediately without flipping the card, and applying damage calculation. This card can only be summoned by removing from play "Nightmare King - Maveliance" from your side of the field. This card is destroyed at the End Phase of your turn. When this card is destroyed by it's effect, inflict 1000 life points to both players. More cards will be added to the topic as they are finished. Hope ya like 'em! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odin557 Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 OOOO I love the picture!A tad overpowered, its a good thing that you destroy it in 3 turns. I rate it as a 7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 XD, thanks, It is a bit overpowered, but I guess the cost to summon it, and it's death in three turns, makes up for it? :P, anyways thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shurikenny Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 I think this card would be Forbidden its a little to strong it should be effected by something but nice card 8/10 like the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Maybe an attack of 2700 or 2600? XD. Thanks :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 nice cards...but they're not a bit overpowered...THEY'RE UNBELIEVABLY OVERPOWERED, anyway tell u wat..my mood is like this: if there is any card contains a word called this card cannot be destroyed by anything..i give 0/10...but a magicial force in the charming pics stops me from 9/10 :D u rock! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 LOVE THE BOX ART!!!!! Aye, but I do agree, Nightmare King is wayyy overpowered, possibly make him not immune to Spell, Trap and monster effects and lower his ATK to 2800 - 2600 and DEF to 2300. Also when quoting a card name, always put " " around the names. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Everyone seems to be charmed by the pics, but I'm focusing on the effects, and combos and stuff XD, I'll fix the Nightmare King, thanks everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Awesome Box art my friend. :D you need a disclaimer for your art. Your cards are a tad overpowered. Try to stick to regular types. I'd make nightmare king a DARK Fiend, and give his stats: 2600 ATK and like 2100 DEF the doom spirit would be DARK Fiend / Spirit, bump him up to 8 star, and his stats are fine. Your cards are just plain overpowered. I love their art though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Nightmare king is fixed, different effect, and lower attack and defense. you need a disclaimer for your art. Totally understand, thanks for telling me that XD. BTW, why do ya think Doom Spirit is OP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Altar of Mavelliance". When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all "Nightmare" monsters except this card. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Nightmare" monster in your Graveyard. Destroy this card during your 3rd Standby Phase after this card is Summoned. That should be the right OCG, if you want you can add 1 ___ counter to it each standby phase and once it gets 3 you dfestroy it just to be flashy. Did you mean for the controller to be able to Normal Summon and Set it? If you didn't, add "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set at the start of the effect I posted above. I also want to see Altar of Maveliance. (I think you meant malveillance.) I'll need to see it before I can properly talk about balance. Change the type from Demi-God to Fiend for realism. Take out the circulation, for Limited Edition you need a gold sticker in the corner which YCM doesn't have. Change 009 in the Set ID to EN009. Hope that helps. ^_^ Sorry I could only comment on the big card, I'll try to comment on the others when I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ardie Milwrick Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Those are some pretty sweet cards my man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Altar of Mavelliance". When this card is Special Summoned' date=' destroy all "Nightmare" monsters except this card. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Nightmare" monster in your Graveyard. Destroy this card during your 3rd Standby Phase after this card is Summoned. That should be the right OCG, if you want you can add 1 ___ counter to it each standby phase and once it gets 3 you dfestroy it just to be flashy. Did you mean for the controller to be able to Normal Summon and Set it? If you didn't, add "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set at the start of the effect I posted above. I also want to see Altar of Maveliance. (I think you meant malveillance.) I'll need to see it before I can properly talk about balance. Change the type from Demi-God to Fiend for realism. Take out the circulation, for Limited Edition you need a gold sticker in the corner which YCM doesn't have. Change 009 in the Set ID to EN009. Hope that helps. ^_^ Sorry I could only comment on the big card, I'll try to comment on the others when I can.[/quote'] Interesting, I'll fix it up with your tips, thanks ^^b I had the This card cannot be normal summoned or set thing before, but then I changed it cause there were a lot of words making the description hard to read XD. I guess I could squish it in there. EDIT: I fixed Nightmare King, and I've Fixed Doom Spirit so you must tribute it to summon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Box art rocks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 XD Thanks, I also added an additional card to the set, Nightmare Guard - Kain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Nice now. :P Looking good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 I CAN'T STOP LOOKING AT THE BOX ART!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH :O I think this guy deserves 1000 +reps for the box art, it's fantastic, best i've ever seen..... WOW!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
petar95 Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 OH MY GOD THE BOX ART IT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!My Rankings8/10 for pic. for cards7.5/10 for cards They are a bit overpowered so 6/10 for effectsAND finaly For Box art 99999999999999999999999999999/10Total Value: 3,374,553 GoldTake the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.Take the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz.[br]Click here to feed me a fruit![br]Get your own at Dinomon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Thanks xD, I've added two new cards! Nightmare Boss - Asura, and Doom Spirit Tribute, a Spell Card.These to cards along with Doom Spirit make a combo. By Having at least one Doom Spirit, and playing Doom Spirit Tribute, you can Sacrifice the Doom Spirit, to Summon the Nightmare Boss - Asura, it's a shame Asura can't attack on the turn he is summoned though, thanks to Doom Spirit Tribute, so the opponent still has a chance, or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Sweet cards. 9/10!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L. Rutsah Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 WOW! Nice pics! Were did you get them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 I practically made them, the only thing I didn't draw up was the characters and symbols used. Characters are battlers from the New RPG Maker. Credits for them go to Enterbrain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 *Added a new Nightmare creature, Nightmare God - Velius! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 AWESOME! Where did you find the pic for the first one? P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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