the sacred beast : charoma, lord of screaming wind

[dimitri]

this is my sacred beast rate please:

 

effect/

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by returning 3 level 5 or higher monster Cards from your grave to deck(if you have more den 3 high level monsters,return them all to your deck).during each standby fase choose 1 monster in your grave, this card atk and def become 1000 x the level of the monster you choose, during the end fase this card atk and def become 0.when this card attack, you can send up to 2 spell or trap cards to the grave by remove from play 1 level 5 or higher monster from your grave.

[Noble Legend]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by returning 3 level 5 or higher monster Cards from your grave to deck(if you have more den 3 high level monsters' date='return them all to your deck).during each standby fase choose 1 monster in your grave, this card atk and def become 1000 x the level of the monster you choose, during the end fase this card atk and def become 0.when this card attack, you can send up to 2 spell or trap cards to the grave by remove from play 1 level 5 or higher monster from your grave. [/quote']

 

Okay, I'm going to be honest and say that you were VERY VERY lazy when writing this effect.... Here is a re-written effect (OCG might not be perfect, but it is A LOT better :)):

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by returning 3 or more Level 5 or highter monsters from your Graveyard to your Deck. During each of your Standby Phases' date=' select 1 monster in your Graveyard, this card's ATK and DEF become 500 x the Level of the selected monster. During the End Phase reduce this card's ATK and DEF to 0. When this card attacks, you can send up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards to the Graveyard by removing from play 1 Level 5 or higher monster from your Graveyard. [/quote']

 

Now, this is quite a nice effect, I'm fond of it, 8/10:)

[dimitri]

i yust need a rewright not a difrent effect

[Dark Supreme]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by returning 3 or more Level 5 or highter monsters from your Graveyard to your Deck. During your Standby Phase, select 1 monster in your Graveyard, this card's ATK and DEF becomes equal to 1000 x the Level of the selected monster. During your End Phase, this card's ATK and DEF becomes equal to 0. When this card attacks, you may remove 1 Level 5 or higher monster in your Graveyard to destroy 2 Spell or Trap Cards on the field.

 

^ This is correct, I guess.

 

Very Overpowered. 3.750 / 10.

[Mr. Judgment Dragon]

Bad OCG. Nuff said. So far 2/10. May get more if you improve OCG.

[Encalade Shinamisu]

ocg errors, but well balanced. kind of like a felgrand dragon...

[Zeroshot]

Overpowered. Bad OCG. OK Effect. Good Picture

 

2/10

[Dark Supreme]

Ppl go easy on the OCG, he clearly can't do it. I alreeady fixd it rate on that OCG.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

The pic looks like a pokemon.