Careless Whisper Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 Alright...Thanks to Torchman for setting this up so well in the Great War RP, I would like your comments on this Short Skit, the introduction of Cydonia Crystal. Please Comment and critisize if you wish...I love making this skits...lol________________________________________________________ "Sario!" sounded a dreamy and stary voice radiating from the center of the moonlit lake. The waters calmed as the girl with dazling silver hair drifted like an angel towards the lake shore. Her feet barely skimming the purple surface of the Dark Lake.The voice struck Sario like a lightning bolt as he shot upright, Xander falling on his back, cursing out of the corner of Sario's eye, but he took no notice. His eyes were only for the silver haired girl gliding along the surface of Artarius the Dark Lake. Her eyes, emitting such a strong moon-like aura, gleaming like purple stars in the clearness of the night time sky. The girl reached the shoreline and held out her hand, as Sario did the same to greet her. Her hand was warm and soft as he took it so gentily in his grasp. He pulled her closer, and put his free arm around to embrace her, as she did the same, laying her head across his chest. Her scent, so familiar, so strong, so beautiful, it filled his nostrils gracefully, and he finally whispered with so much compassion that Xander thought of nothing but Meti and Ino-Koa, holding hand-in-hand. "Cydonia Crystal, my love, it's been far too long." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 Your welcome! :D Great as always. I'm starting to see so much drama and plot twists, the Great War RP's posts could be rounded up and turned into a book! Maybe there should be a tribute banner or something, with the Season 1 and 2 characters in it. The Great War is by far the best RP I've ever been in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 -Wipes a tear from eye- Its beautiful.... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 bump...2 comments is not enough...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 I just didn't like it when you used Dark Lake...its meh. The rest of it is GOLD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 Um, the Dark Lake is sort of the name of the Lake. I know Cliche, but it's only a short name...Artarius is the full name. So I had to include it...lol Thnx for the comment!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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