HTL Productions Present - Blaze Wraith (Ultimate Support for 0 ATK monsters!)

[Huntar!]

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I dont own the artwork for this card.

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add up to 3 monsters that have 0 ATK from your Deck to your hand. You can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand to Special Summon 1 monster from your hand that has 0 ATK. When this card is destroyed, you can draw 1 card for each monster with 0 ATK that was sent to the Graveyard during that turn. As long as this card is face-up, all face-up monsters with 0 ATK gain the following effect: You can Tribute this card to to destroy 1 card your opponent controls and inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

Hope you like it. ;)[/align]

[Wyhe]

good card. (8.768/10)

[Huntar!]

any comments?

 

thx

[Mr. Judgment Dragon]

Cool card.

[Wyhe]

1 last thing:the picture could be better. (I was busy caring about the effect back then.)

[Huntar!]

kthx

 

any other comments?

[DarkRemix14]

9/10

good

[Huntar!]

k thnx

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

I agree. Good card, but the pic could be a bit better. 9/10

[Huntar!]

Thanks. :D

[airbornedivision]

sweete! i love it! especially the pic. 9/10

[Huntar!]

thanks.

[Huntar!]

bump

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Umm...

 

WOWOVERPOWERED.

 

Gren Maju Da Eiza has 0 ATK. Helios the Primordial Sun has 0 ATK. 3 GMDE's or Helios's in a single turn is death to your opponent.

 

Plus, Scapegoat + this card = 2000 damage to your opponent, though that's not nearly as significant as the other possible abuses of this card.

 

Make some sort of cost for it, because it's nothing but benifit after benifit ATM. Make players question the strategic value of the card to their playing style. Right now, it's splashable in any removal deck because it can fetch Helios and GMDE.

 

A few OCG errors:

•As long as this card is face-up

That's definitely incorrect. Either cut it out entirely, or make it "While this card remains face-up on the field."

•When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add up to 3 monsters that have 0 ATK from your Deck to your hand.

These are two extremely minor wording errors that completely change the effect of this card. First off, if this card gets Bottomlessed, you still get the monsters. If that was intended, leave it; if not, make it "When this card is Normal Summoned successfully." Second, you don't shuffle your Deck after you get the monsters unless it's written into the card. I know it seems childishly pedantic, but it's little things that make the card. Lastly, there's the unbelievably little error "that have 0 ATK." It should be "with 0 ATK." It's little things that make the card; if it weren't, I wouldn't point that out.

•Special Summon 1 monster from your hand that has 0 ATK.

This is yet another incredibly minor correction; "from your hand" is unnecessary, and it should be "with 0 ATK."

•you can draw 1 card for each monster with 0 ATK that was sent to the Graveyard during that turn.

This is another err that changes the gameplay; it doesn't say whether or not "Blaze Wraith" itself is included.

 

As far as originality goes, not bad at all. My only complaint in this area is that the title and illus have nothing to do with the effect.

 

FINAL AROSH RATING: 74% C+

[Mad Hopz]

Nice job. It's nice but not perfect. 8/10

[WindupRabbitFan14]

86%

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Nice, just change the following:

 

Change the picture.

 

that have = with

 

Normal Summoned=Tribute Summoned.

 

Change the last sentence to "Tribute 1 monster you control with 0 ATK to destroy 1 card your opponent controls and inflict 500 damage to your opponent."

 

You'll need a Set ID too to make it realistic.

 

I like the name. ^_^