My first archetype boss monsters

[Void Star]

Im new to the entire posting card thing. If you want to look at how the deck works, ill post that later. I would like pointers and I accept contructive criticism. This is my reworked Bliss Queen for my custom blitz archetype (ill post the old one later). For context, the design of blitz was to end the race of modren yugioh. this deck is resource heavy and requires you to carefully make decisions. If you dont have ammo for cards you wont be able to play them. Also, its archetype locked so no cheese cards. Im aware some of the text isent ment to your standard like B.Q(bliss queen) or OPT(once per turn), QE(quick effect). I needed space. I also post on reddit but I dont get proper feedback so I came here. 

So ill break down my cards.

Bliss queen is the leader of the blitz.

Main boss is bliss queen her self base form. In lore her body is made of ultra dense material nuclear pasta which is why I gave her a high defense. She suppose to feel unmoveable, dangerous and bounces effects around. I tried to incorporate the real life effects of nuclear pasta, that being absorbing, repealing, and hard to bring out. And no, she will not implode.

Xyz bliss queen is a more offensive version with a similar effect to c101 without the revival with protection.

The fusion bliss queen isent going to be used but I made it because I wanted to see what you guys think of it. Its absolutely cracked, tier 0 with 0 interaction.

[Andres Niño Murcia]

They are incredibly powerful, and I love your idea of creating them based on the "Nuclear Pasta" concept (by the way, that’s a great observation, since it's considered the ideal state of matter in the universe—which creates a nice mechanical contrast with your design). However, your boss monsters are all alone without a supporting cast of cards! For instance, you could use monsters that can copy "Bliss Queen's" Level to facilitate Xyz Summons, since I assume you want to bring out "Paradox Queen" as quickly as possible. Another point concerns "Bliss Prime": it's very difficult to summon given the rest of the archetype. Think of it as a "cascade effect": if one part of the archetype hinders speedy summoning, subsequent summons become complicated too—plus, needing the "Polymerization" card adds another layer of difficulty. I love the artwork, and I’d love to see the "servants and vassals" of these three "Bliss Queens"! I hope this feedback helps ♥♥ ;)

Oh, and a fun fact: the three "Bliss Queens" kind of remind me of Sailor Galaxia, the villain from *Sailor Moon* XD! (Don't take that the wrong way—I love *Sailor Moon*; I adore them! ♥♥)

Edited September 18 by Andres Niño Murcia