SushiTheLegend Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 What about my Grand Elder of Vampires? I ended up with an 8 Star 3200/2400. But I think with the effect the ATK/DEF is overpowered. Even though Vampire Genesis has 3000/2100 for a 7 Star. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 All suggetions for these is appreciated. There are a few Grammar and Spelling errors. Female 1st years- Ami and Umi Fudo-"Increase this cards atk of card by 200..." Sentence doesn't make sense. Should be "Increase the atk of this card..." or "Increase this card's atk..." and you spelled "attaack" wrong. It should be "attack"All-Why do they have parentheses in the first sentence? Overall good cards. Beautiful pics and great concept. Thank you SI and your welcome Cyber Dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 Guys I need help with this card, help with the effect and it's supposed to have 0 ATK and DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 I dont think this is good but Tribute two level 6 light monsters to either raise attack and def of this monster by 1000 or take the next card your opponet draws and send it to the graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaloog91 Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 All suggetions for these is appreciated. There are a few Grammar and Spelling errors. Female 1st years- Ami and Umi Fudo-"Increase this cards atk of card by 200..." Sentence doesn't make sense. Should be "Increase the atk of this card..." or "Increase this card's atk..." and you spelled "attaack" wrong. It should be "attack"All-Why do they have parentheses in the first sentence? Overall good cards. Beautiful pics and great concept. Thank you SI and your welcome Cyber Dude. Thanks I'll try to work on the grammer while I put the effects in parentheses because it's the effect all student monsters share with students as there sub type. I think it makes it easier to distinguish there effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 Hey thanks for the effect idea Big Boy, I did modify it a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Ash Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 It's a bit like Maju Garzett, isn't it? Image is good, and it would gain good ATK seen as how the tributes are Dragons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaloog91 Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 Excelent effect and yeah since the tributes must be dragons this thing can easily become a powerhouse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyberdude Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 my new charmer cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 Both cards that El, and cyberdude posted up were pretty straight forward. No crits or comments so good job guys. Keep the cards coming! Did I miss anything? hmm I better go check now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyberdude Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 ceck out newest set http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=7135 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 Both cards that ElWhat to you mean by that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragons-4-lyfe Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 can someone rate my dragon set and fix some cards http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=6019 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 El I said bot cards that you, and cyberdude posted...read the full sentence. Dragon I will help by you may not like what I have to say?... I will say a lot too if you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted August 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2007 Hey, everyone. After making that Final Fusionist card, I decided to make a set of unique and never seen before Fusion Support. Here is my first card, and I could use you personnal opinion on it before I continue my set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragons-4-lyfe Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 @ GK you said remove from play fusion material monsters from the fusion deck @Six i don't care im not gonna improve if people say nice things about my cards I'd rather want criticism so go ahead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted August 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 @ GK you said remove from play fusion material monsters from the fusion deck @Six i don't care im not gonna improve if people say nice things about my cards I'd rather want criticism so go aheadYeah, I know. Think Five Headed Dragon or Ojama Knight. Both of them have Fusion Material Monsters in the Fusion Deck. Plus, I'll be creating a whole new set of other cards that do too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 Hey guys, can you give me ideas for the effect of this card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted August 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 Hey, Elsandero. Here's something me and Sushi drew up. Hope you like it: A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. Once per turn, by paying 2000 Life Points, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this card attacks your opponent’s Life Points directly twice during the same turn, you win the Duel. I would also raise its LV to 9, so that there is no Metamorphosis abuse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 OK THANX VERY MUCH btw, Gongratz to Soul(or Six, what you prefer) for getting 3rd on the '' In Honour of SuperSanji'' contest, WELL DONE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 Yeah awesome effect! But the name is too long. Thanks El I hoped for better in the contest but oh well still pretty good, and you should have gotten a top place. Next time aye mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 yeah, yeah I was 4th, AARRGHH EDIT:Hey Six, what should I change in the card name thing, the ''Deadly'' or the ''Twin Headed'' part? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dojinn Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 Check out my new warrior does this card need improvement? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 If I was to take one part out it would be the Twinheaded part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 Hows this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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