Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 dont vote just tell if good 1 bad - 10 good !!!!be mean!!!! but truthful Finished cards on bottom still need to check grammar though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 Remember what I told you. Capitilization errors = ocg errors = denied entry Keep on trying, almost there... ^^ gain attack = gain ATKnormal summon = Normal Summontribute = Tributedragon = Dragon or Dragon-Type so on and so on ^^ 7.3/10 Great job on longer effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 Remember what I told you. Capitilization errors = ocg errors = denied entry Keep on trying' date=' almost there... ^^ gain attack = gain ATKnormal summon = Normal Summontribute = Tribute so on and so on ^^ 7.3/10 Great job on longer effects[/quote']ok what cap errors and did I get the other part ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 editted in the cap errors and what else you did that was good ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 editted in the cap errors and what else you did that was good ^^pls ask ur friends and leader to check this out and thanks so mutch and if I dont get it Theres always a next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 Just edit those and you have a higher chance of getting in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 with both of them, i have a question. HOW do you get them on the field, it doesn't state which position it can be summoned in, heaven would be in trouble cause it would mean that. plus, you can really ov erdrive their effects by discarding dragons like crazy, they could create insane amounts of DEF or ATK very quickly, good idea, but bad grammer, 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 with both of them' date=' i have a question. HOW do you get them on the field, it doesn't state which position it can be summoned in, heaven would be in trouble cause it would mean that. plus, you can really ov erdrive their effects by discarding dragons like crazy, they could create insane amounts of DEF or ATK very quickly, good idea, but bad grammer, 4/10[/quote'] No offense, but are you retarded?!?! It says: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 face-up Dragon-Type monsters on your side of the field [i editted the ocg to show you how it should be written!] You don't have to state which position! Also you just can't discard cards from your hand willy nilly! This is a rigged / screwed rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 tut tut, unfortunatly, you didn't remember the thing about maximum cards in hands, using cards that let you draw would work,then, when you have more then 7, you discard a dragon and boom, more DEF/ATK, card destruction, hand severing, the list goes on. maybe i was wrong about the position but the grammer could use some work. plus, there is no need to insult minorities, i'm sure people with disabilities are much more successful then you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 It was no insult to disablities... But you annoy me with your calm insults >.< retarded has more then one meaning 1) Mentally challenged or disabled2) Stupid and or misguided in belief Just saying if you could read. Yet you said they could discard on their own accord, which you can't... One more thing, if you want to insult you ask for neg reps >.< these cards don't deserve a 40% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 Well couple OCG issues, good cards, but are not the best :S Good work :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 i said like crazy, i didn't say on their own accord meh, in any case, these thing are too abusable, after all, heaven already has 2400 DEF and hell already 2100 ATK maybe, instead you could trbibute any number of dragons on your side of the field and they gain the boosts depending on the number, course, that could be abusable but then the graveyard can't be abused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 ok but thats a wierd way to do things but ur right they r over powered huuuuuuummm..................... U forgot heven loses def from fiends and hell loses atk from warriors I fixed them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 i know their effect about fiends and warriors, but the odds for someone to only be fighting fiends. their effect are watered a little, good, i can give it a 6/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 YOUR CARDS ARE NOT LIMITED REMOVE THE CIRCULATION!!!Now, for the rating... I'd say that both are overpowered.. you need to realize the implications of running these cards in a Dragon Deck.. say you have 4 Dragons in your Graveyard with "Kaaa" on the field, that's 2700 ATK. Now, chances are that your opponent isn't going to be playing a Warrior-heavy deck unless they're playing a Six Samurai Deck (Or a Warrior Toolbox... I've seen that before). And if they're playing the "SS", then you could probably just switch "Kaaa" out for "Zepher"... By the way, "Zepher" is also overpowered. There is just about no way that your opponent (in the metagame) is going to be running a Fiend Deck, or anything with remotely enough Fiend Monsters to pose a threat to this monster's DEF. With this guy in Defense Position in a Dragon-Type Deck, you can have a powerful defensive barrier of 2900-3400 easy with just 4 Dragons in the Graveyard. I know you want to make some cards that sound cool, look cool, and also have that style of yin-yang effect (after all, who doesn't? I love doing that!), but you need to watch for overpowering your cards as you do so. This card idea is very overpowered -- look at "Infernal Incinerator" if you want some good reference on stat increases based on monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoodat1994 Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 they r ok... the ocg needs work... the balance needs work... 8/10, good job for now, keep on working... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 thanks 4 all the advise I will work on them hared till I get a 8.5 or 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 YOUR CARDS ARE NOT LIMITED REMOVE THE CIRCULATION!!!Now' date=' for the rating... I'd say that both are overpowered.. you need to realize the implications of running these cards in a Dragon Deck.. say you have 4 Dragons in your Graveyard with "Kaaa" on the field, that's 2700 ATK. Now, chances are that your opponent isn't going to be playing a Warrior-heavy deck unless they're playing a Six Samurai Deck (Or a Warrior Toolbox... I've seen that before). And if they're playing the "SS", then you could probably just switch "Kaaa" out for "Zepher"... By the way, "Zepher" is also overpowered. There is just about no way that your opponent (in the metagame) is going to be running a Fiend Deck, or anything with remotely enough Fiend Monsters to pose a threat to this monster's DEF. With this guy in Defense Position in a Dragon-Type Deck, you can have a powerful defensive barrier of 2900-3400 easy with just 4 Dragons in the Graveyard. I know you want to make some cards that sound cool, look cool, and also have that style of yin-yang effect (after all, who doesn't? I love doing that!), but you need to watch for overpowering your cards as you do so. This card idea is very overpowered -- look at "Infernal Incinerator" if you want some good reference on stat increases based on monsters.[/quote']traps like trap hole and mirrior force shall destroy them easily Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 still capitilization errors...but getting better ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 edited even more still working on magic ,trap ,and fusion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 24, 2008 Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 Heaven's effect should read: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Dragon-Type monsters on the field from play. This card gains 500 DEF for every Dragon-Type monser in your Graveyard, and loses 500 DEF for every face-down Spell or Trap card on your side of the field. basically the same for the other one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2008 thanks dude but what about hell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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