RickiMinaj Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Hello peoplezIm gphakuand im holding a poetry club, inn this club, you can share your poetry, and I will ask judges to grade them. note: i will not be a judge. A few of my friends told me to write poetry, so i thought a poetry clubwould be a good idea. This way, i can share my poetry, and here the poetry of others aswell. And I know many people love to write poetry, so if u do, this is the club to join.________________________________Fun Rules to Follow:All rules that applly in each forum apply here aswellIf your poetry is consists of cursing, please do not post itYou can also share songs and Raps but Poetry is our main Key!If you do not like a poem, or feel it is not in your taste, please do not flame, or Neg rep people.If a Person has judged your poetry harshly, the Please Do not Neg rep them.Have fun and play safe Dearies!_______________________________To join and to Stay.If you would like to join the poetry Club and Stay in it, you just need to follow the following things! You need to sign up with the following sign up sheet._______________________________User namePoetry StyleHow long have you been doing poetry1 Poem_______________________________In addition to joining the club, you must also joining th club, you must also post at least 1 poem a week Which will be graded by the judge.________________________________the JUDGEThe judge will be anonymous person every time. It might be somone from in the club, or it might be someone from out of YCM. They will read the poem, them PM me the results, and i shall post it. I swear that I will NEBER, and I meen NEBER EBER Be the judge. Have fun dearies ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 1SDANGentle and hard.One day.Poem:Sweet the berries are like nectar from the hive.The water, soil, and sun keeps the berries alive.I like to meet it's taste and sweet.The heat is dry and the berries fry.But another day the berries come to stay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 very nice poemI adore it. the entry poems will not be judged btw and your InHave fun in this club! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 -Darth Browarod-Random-Um, well, at my high school we always had to do some writing in English class every year, so probably at least since freshman year of high school. [spoiler=The Door]Confronted with the door to forever,I hesitate and start to wonder.And as I wonder I begin to wanderThe lonely path that is the past. I see my mother and my fatherJoyfully holding a newborn babe.And there with them are my two sisters,Happy for a new play thing. And then a leap, I’m older now,I’m playing with my friends.I laugh and jump and swing around,Not a worry in the world. But suddenly I reach a chasmI crossed not long ago.A sign describes why this is here,“Brother, husband, father, friend.” Courageously I ventured onReady to face the future.But then I see ahead once moreThe door that bars the way. I cautiously approach it thenWhile weighing pros and cons.I know that I must keep onwardAlong the path I chose. But I do not think that I haveThe strength to open it.For if I did then it would meanMy life would greatly change. I’d get responsibilitiesThat might just be too muchBut then I think about it moreAnd start to realize. In order to advance in lifeI need to try new things.I resolve that this is good for meTo take the next big step. I slowly reach and grasp the handle,This feeling grows inside.And as I cross the thresholdI know I have done right. I close the door and turn aroundReady to face anything.Now I know what the feeling is,I’ve finally grown up. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Can I still use it in this club? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 well, you have to make a new poem every weak so i guess you cant =(And wow browarodJust WowYour In ^_^LOVED THE POEM !!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Sin AuraNo particular stylePoem (this is the one I PMed you): StrickenBy: Ernie W. I saw you right before meEveryday hoping and dreamingSome days were you were not there, but that was not your faultThough I am stricken by never-loveObsession over allKilling my blessingThinking about youTime’s year passed and no love in my eyesThe year re-awoke and now I love once againStill stricken by never-loveToo late for anythingI guess I’m too differentHe is the one you blessYou don’t love me, neither do IYet again I’m still stricken by never-loveYou can’t blame what has brokenTo love you is to take a nothing into existenceNext time please tell me what I did wrongNever love life; love is all a lieSeeing you is still wonderful, yet the person next to you is notThis person must have a better lifeA better one than I doMy life to you is nothingYou have made me stricken by never-loveYou have never loved me, nor do I think you ever will love youBut too late, I have been ripped to shredsYou hate me, but I don’tYou give me meaningBut I can define you to every known meaning of love and hate togetherLife may come strange, but to you it’s notHe is still by your sideRemember that time when I put a false meaning to your securityIt has made me stricken by never-loveYou don’t care how I feelI guess I don’t care about you eitherWe both know where this will goI want to stay beside youBut seems I wont and I’ll stay further and further awaySeems that I will never be near youFurther away every timeThis will never happen and I am happy that it never willI don’t care even if I am still stricken by never-love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 oh, i knew that onei loved itso ur in ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 I took me 6 monthes to complete that poem. It's about a girl who I have litterly never spoken too, but I love her and her souless rejection towards me. Her name is Kristen and I hope she dies... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 The poem for this week: My Silent LullabyBy Ernie W I am sitting here all aloneMy darkness is reigning over meThoughts of her seem to cross my mindMy wrists are bleeding But it's for youOnly youI am not blessed by GodHe hates me and it's your faultWhat did I do for this?I am dying hereAnd what a joyous feelingNow I don't have to think of you anymoreO what a lifeless lieI hate youEverything I said to you was a lieI don't love youI hate youBut I have to think...I'm about to die and your the last thing on my life....Spare me the pityI bless over youAnd I forgive youThis is my end, and you let goI love you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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