Junk Raver Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 [align=center]^_^ [/align] [align=center]Hello People! Yes, i know I know, that is 2 Fan-Fics I have given up on now, but, this one is a keeper. I have been foolish within my previous Fan-Fictions, and that is why they never get completed. I seem to: - Make the Plot to complicated- Write too much and get bored eventually- Have complicated Decks that are hard to work with This is why this Fan-Fic will be different from the others. This Fan-Fic’s idea was actually made before I wrote my previous 2 Fan-Fics, however the only thing changed is the main characters Deck. I am going to make the plot more sensible, give the characters easy to manage Decks, and instead of writing chapters, I shall split everything into small Segments. There will be a number of Seasons. Each season will have a number of Sections, and each Section will have a number of Segments. Segments will be parts of a certain story, when a certain event or story is finished, it will complete a Section, when all the sections are finished, it will complete a Season. I have also decided to go with the basic script format, it’s easier to use and work with.[/align] [spoiler= Characters] When new characters appear, they will be added here, so make sure to check the Character list before you read each new Segment. Name: Erin FantasiaAge: 18Deck: Superior SynchroLocation: Bluerose City, EnglandOccupation: Shop AssistantBio: Erin Fantasia, Born August 11th 2069, is the stereotypical Teenager. Hates working, loves drinking and would rather be a worldwide top duelist then a nobody. He works for his local Supermarket, has a great deal of friends and has a rather Unique Deck. Name: Nigel GrantAge: 19Deck: Insect Swarm [align=center]Season 1 - Tales of Gems Season Overview Erin Fantasia's dream, to break free from normality, comes true when a masked man hires him to complete a task of collecting 3 very special Duel Monsters cards, known as the Blue-Gem-Trio, from 3 sinister theifs. Introduction To get the Fan-Fic rolling… This Fan-Fic starts as Erin arrives at the local gaming store, CCA, which is located in the town’s large shopping centre (mall), as each week they have a weekly Dueling Tournament. All you do is face off against 1 opponent, if you win, you get a prize. How will Erin fair, as this, is his first time at a Tournament.[/align] [spoiler=Section 1 - The Superior Synchros] [spoiler=Segment 1 - Selection] Buster, the owner of the CCA card gaming shop, carefully put the small pieces of paper into the bag and shook it vigorously. He always thought the fair way to select match ups, was by getting a participant to write their name on a piece of paper and have it drawn from a bag. He would have used a hat, but sadly he did not own one. Buster - Right, we will have three matches going on at once, and so on until everyone has dueled. The first name is, Barry R, and the second name is, Roger H, Barry and Roger, over there please and begin when you’re ready. The next name is, Michael Stevenson, and the next, Lisa P, you two over to that dueling space. Now the first name for the third match is, Nigel Grant, and you will be facing, Erin Fantasia. Erin looked up from within the crown of people and headed to the third dueling arena space, Nigel followed. Buster - When one match is over I will call more names, until then, begin the duels, watch the duels and come shop anyone who is waiting, I do need money! Erin and Nigel stepped into their dueling circles (Space where you stand to Duel) and activated their Duel Disks. Erin + Nigel - DUEL START! 4000 Life Points Each Nigel - I’ll go first, Draw! (Nigel Draws 1 Card) Nigel - I Summon “Howling Insect” in Attack Position. Howling Insect - Level 3 - EARTH - Insect - Effect Monster1200 / 1300 Nigel - And I shall Set a face-down and end my turn. (Face-Down placed) Erin - Draw! (Erin Draws 1 Card) Erin - I Summon “Superior Resister” in Attack Position. Erin - Superior Resister is immune to your Trap Card effects, so if your face-down is a Trap Card, it’s not going to work. “Superior Resister”, attack his “Howling Insect”. (Howling Insect is destroyed, Nigel receives 200 damage) Nigel’s Life Points = 3800 Nigel - I activate “Howling Insect’s” effect, when “Howling Insect” is destroyed by battle; I can Special Summon an Insect monster from my Deck with 1500 ATK or less. So I Special Summon “Pinch Hopper”. Pinch Hopper - Level 4 - EARTH - Insect - Effect Monster1000 / 1200 Erin - Fine, I place a face-down and end my turn. Erin’s Life Points = 4000Nigel’s Life Points = 3800 Nigel - Draw! (Nigel Draws 1 Card) I Summon “Chainsaw Insect” in Attack Position Chainsaw Insect - Level 4 - EARTH - Insect - Effect Monster2400 / 0 Next I activate my face-down card, “Insect Imitation”. It is always good to place Spell Cards face-down, it always fools your opponent. This Spell Card allows me to Release 1 Insect-Type monster I control to Special Summon 1 Insect-Type monster from my Deck that is 1 Level higher than that of the Released monster. So I Release my “Pinch Hopper” and Special Summon “Ultimate Insect Lv.5” from my Deck. Ultimate Insect Lv5 - Level 5 - WIND - Insect - Effect Monster2300 / 900 Nigel - And that is not all, when “Pinch Hopper” is sent from the field to the Graveyard, I can Special Summon 1 Insect-Type monster from my hand, so I also Special Summon “Saber Beetle”. Saber Beetle - Level 6 - EARTH - Insect - Effect Monster2400 / 600(Shield-Breaker Effect) Nigel - I now have 3 Insects with over 2000 ATK each on my field, now let’s end this. “Saber Beetle” Attack! End of Segment 1 [spoiler=Segment 2 - Magnum Force] Nigel - I now have 3 Insects with over 2000 ATK each on my field, now let’s end this. “Saber Beetle” Attack! Erin - Activate face-down, “Negate Attack”, your attack is negated and you’re Battle Phase Ends. Nigel - You were lucky, I end my turn. Erin - Draw! (Erin draws 1 card) I Summon “Superior Darkchild” in Attack Position! And I Equip “Synchro Hero” to Superior Darkchild, which increases her ATK by 500 but also, increases her Level by 1. (ATK increased to 1300, Level increased to 3) Nigel - Both of your monsters are still too weak to attack my arsenal of Insects. Erin - Ah, but that, is about to change. “Superior Darkchild” is a Tuner monster, and by combining a Tuner monster with another monster, I can Summon a Synchro monster which has the exact Level of the combined monsters. Due to the effect of “Synchro Hero” my Darkchild is now a Level 3, and my Resistor is a Level 4, so I can Synchro Summon a Level 7 monster. So I Release my “Superior Darkchild” and my “Superior Resistor” in order to Synchro Summon this, “Superior Magnum” And as you can clearly see, his ATK points are higher then that of any of the monsters you control, and don’t worry, there is no question on which monster to destroy. I know of the effect of “Ultimate Insect Lv5”, if I left it alone, you could Release it to Special Summon “Ultimate Insect Lv7” which would decrease all my monsters ATK by 700, so say goodbye to your not-so-ultimate-insect. “Superior Magnum” attack with Magnum Force! (Superior Magnum lunges forward and slams his fist into Ultimate Insect, Ultimate Insect is destroyed) and you take 200 damage due to ATK difference. Nigel’s Life Points = 3600 But that is not all Nigel - Say what? Erin - When “Superior Magnum” destroys a monster by battle, he can inflict damage to your Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster times 300 points, so say goodbye to 1500 Life Points. (Magnum raises his Gun Arm and fires at Nigel) Nigel’s Life Points = 2100 I place 1 card face-down and end my turn. Nigel - About time, Draw! (Nigel draws 1 card) This isn’t over yet; I remove from my Graveyard from play, my “Pinch Hopper” and my “Howling Insect” to Special Summon “Doom Dozer” in Attack Position. Doom Dozer is one hell of an insect, with 2800 ATK and a Deck Destruction ability, and the ability to be Special Summoned by removing two insects in my Graveyard from play, he is going to trample you! Doom Dozer - Level 8 - EARTH - Insect - Effect Monster2800 / 2600 “Doom Dozer”, attack his “Superior Magnum”. Erin - Activate Trap Card, “Synchro Reflect”. This card allows me to negate an attack on a Synchro monster I control and then destroy one monster on your field, so I shall destroy “Doom Dozer”. (Doom Dozer is destroyed) Nigel - Damn You! Erin - It is obvious that your strategy revolves around complete swarming; you seem to disregard Trap Cards also. Yes it is true that players in this age tend to ignore the use of Traps, but they will always be the true Trump Cards. Nigel - Shut it! I end my turn. Erin - Draw (Erin draws 1 card) I shall activate “Premature Burial”, this allows me to Special Summon one monster from my Graveyard at the cost of 800 Life Points. Erin’s Life Points = 3200 I shall Special Summon “Superior Resister” (Refer to Segment 1 for Image) Next I shall Normal Summon “Superior Lazarus”. And guess what, Lazarus is also a Tuner monster, so I Release my Level 2 Lazarus and my Level 4 Resistor to Synchro Summon my Level 6 “Superior Crimson”! When Crimson is Summoned, he gains 200 ATK for each Superior monster I control, so his ATK becomes 2200. Now its destruction time, “Superior Magnum”, destroy his “Saber Beetle”! (Saber Beetle is destroyed, 100 Battle Damage taken) Nigel’s Life Points = 2000 And since your Beetle was a Level 6 monster, you take 1800 Damage from Magnums effect! Nigel’s Life Points = 200 It’s your turn. Nigel - I will not lose, I never lose. Draw! (Nigel draws 1 card) Ha, perfect, I am sorry to report but I am going to win! I remove “Saber Beetle” and “Doom Dozer” from my Graveyard from play to Special Summon my second “Doom Dozer”, I have three in my Deck. (Doom Dozer Summoned) I can use my Dozer to destroy your Magnum, and my Chainsaw to destroy your Crimson, you will be left defenseless. “Doom Dozer” go, attack and finally destroy his Magnum!!!! Erin - Wrong again my friend. Nigel - How, you have no face-downs. Erin - Maybe not, but I have Crimson. By Releasing “Superior Crimson” (Crimson is Released) I can negate 1 of your attacks and end your Battle Phase, he is a monster form Negate Attack. Nigel - No! But then. Erin - Yes, I win. Draw! (Erin draws 1 card) Magnum, attack “Chainsaw Insect”! (Chainsaw Insect is destroyed) Nigel’s Life Points = 100 And of course, you take 1200 Damage from Magnum’s effect, which brings your Life Points to… …0 Nigel’s Life Points = 0 Winner = Erin Fantasia End of Segment 2 [align=center]Segment 3 will be up in some comments time ^_^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 This is actually pretty good fan-fic. I thought it wouldn't be that good since you just seem to write alittle then quit, but, when I saw you will have a Segments it was pretty cool. I like it so far can't wait for Segment 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Thanx ^_^ I knew one of the reasons i gave up on the others, was the pressure to write alot for each chapter, but, if i make chapters into segments, it will be an easier process, and is less likly i will get bored and stop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Thanx ^_^ I knew one of the reasons i gave up on the others' date=' was the pressure to write alot for each chapter, but, if i make chapters into segments, it will be an easier process, and is less likly i will get bored and stop.[/quote'] That is a good idea. I have a (active) fan-fic and sometimes it takes me a week or two to post the next episode as I get bored or writing all of that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 I have as of yet, not had the time to read everyone's Fan-Fics, i do want to tho ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 interesting start. ^_^ the duel seems to go too fast though.... :( oh well, i await your next chapter. ^_^ as a side note: it would be an honor for you to read and rate my fan fic, The Edge of Justice. it has been getting some good reviews.... and i think you might like it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Im glad you said it is going fast, thats the point Compare Yu-Gi-Oh Duels to the Duels in GX, The Duels in Yu-Gi-Oh were immensly slow paced, whereas GX Duels had immense action in a short space of time, and that is what im going for, seeing as GX is alot better then YGO, and 5D's is better still. I want my Duels fast paced but still action packed ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast user J Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Pretty good, but I am sad to hear you gave up on Dimensional Duels. It was one of my favorite Fan-Fics. Anyway can't wait for Segment 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Looking good. I cant wait to see what happens next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanx Guys ^_^ I shall post up Segment 2 when i get a few more comments ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Litch Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 This is awesome...post the next segment plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanx, and after a few more comments i will ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 I liked the last one. :( This one is good. I am actually eager to read segment 2. lol I wish your fan fic the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanx Hunter ^_^ I know alot of people liked it, but it was taking ages to write and i couldnt be bothered, luckly this one is more fast paced, and everything is planned out as i originall thought of the storyline before either of my other fan-fics were made ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Kudos, to our 'Super Raving Moderator.' Good fan-fic. Can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thank You ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Hey are you accepting new characters? I have one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Sounds Good Cant Wait Till Second Segment And Are You Serious About 100 Points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Well, I got them, Stardust. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Yes i am stardust, they will be sent right now ^_^ And Swift, i will be holding a contest in a few days / next week, and winners will get their Deck featured in my Fan-Fic ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Sweet. Best of luck on the fan fic, Osiris. For some reason, I keep thinking your username is DJ Orsis......Don't know why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Dude Thnx For The Points Plz Post Part 2 Soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parion555 Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Cool fan fic,Osiris.Can't wait until part 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanx Boris ^_^ Just afew more comments then i will post Segment 2 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 ahhh dj you left me hanging in suspense there...!!! looking forward to the next part...!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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