Doom Wraith's Card Reviews ~ Get your Cards Reviewed Here!

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

How I rate:

 

OCG - 20%

Name - 5%

Picture - 15%

Balance - 20%

Effect Quality - 20%

Originality - 10%

Little Details - 10%

 

If you receive an 80% or higher in my review, your card will be entered into the Hall of Fame!

 

[spoiler=List of Ratings]

Skyson's Blademaster of the Infernal Apocalypse 78%

Jspamax's Kawaii Bunny Girl - Lucinda

Hunter's Toon Relinquished 74%

01alim's The Salient Sea Serpent 71%

Ultimate_Ryan's Hades Chain Minister 67%

 

 

 

[spoiler=Hall of Fame]

No Hall of Famers so far.

 

[spoiler=Rules]

You can only enter 1 card every 72 hours. (3 days.)

You must enter all Custom Cards mentioned on your card.

You must post the card's effect.

 

Good luck and make awesome cards please. ^_^

[01alim]

what the heck are you doing???

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

A review thread, post a card, or don't post.

[01alim]

are you allowed doing this? oh well let me upload my card.

[Huntar!]

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand by paying 2500 Life Points, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. This card cannot attack in the turn that it is Summoned. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. Once per turn, select 1 monster your opponent controls and equip it to this card (you can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). The ATK and DEF of this card become equal to the monster equipped to this card. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, the equipped monster is destroyed instead, and any battle damage you received from the battle is also inflicted to your opponent's Life Points. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select a Toon monster as an attack target.

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Yes, many have already done so and they're perfectly legitimate.

[01alim]

OK this one then!

[Skyson]

15% for picture. xd

 

First card I made here, have yet to find an effective rate for it, etc etc.

 

 

Effect

This card cannot be Special Summoned. While this card is face-up, any cards sent to the Graveyard are turned face-down. Cards that are face-down in the Graveyard cannot be moved from the Graveyard by another card's effect. When this card is removed from the field, turn all face-down cards in both players' Graveyards face-up, and your opponent takes 150 damage for each card turned face-up.

[Exyst]

 

"Rurarock, Dragon of Devastation" + "Ranarock, Dragon of Oblivion"

This card can only be Fusion Summoned by the effect of "Destruction by Dragon!". By paying 4000 Life Points, destroy all cards your opponent controls and remove from play the same amount of cards from his/her deck. You cannot attack on the turn this effect is used.

 

PM me my rate, and wether i HOF'ed it! Heck YA!!

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Hunter's Toon Relinquished

 

The card's effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand by paying 2500 Life Points, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. This card cannot attack in the turn that it is Summoned. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. Once per turn, select 1 monster your opponent controls and equip it to this card (you can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card). The ATK and DEF of this card become equal to the monster equipped to this card. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, the equipped monster is destroyed instead, and any battle damage you received from the battle is also inflicted to your opponent's Life Points. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select a Toon monster as an attack target.

 

OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while you control "Toon World". You can Special Summon this monster by paying 2500 Life Points. This card cannot attack during the turn it was Summoned. If a "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, destroy this card. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster your opponent controls and equip it to this card. (You can only equip 1 monster at a time to this card.) The ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster. If this card is destroyed by battle, the equipped monster is destroyed instead, and inflict all Battle Damage to your opponent from battles involving this card. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If your opponent controls a face-up Toon monster, this card must select a Toon monster as an attack target.

 

Errors:

 

-on your side of the field is outdated.

-Level 5 or more=Level 5 or higher

-but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more isn't needed because it's not level 5 or more.

-Become=are

-equal to the equipped monster doesn't make sense. Equal to the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster makes sense.

-As a result of=by

-Cap B and D in Battle Damage

-and any battle damage received from the battle is also inflicted to your opponent's Life Points=and inflict all Battle Damage to your opponent from battles involving this card

-If a face-up Toon monster is on your opponent's side of the field=If your opponent controls a face-up Toon monster.

 

11/20 A little outdated since you were going by old monsters.

 

Name: It fits. ^_^ 5/5

 

Picture: Looks very much like it was done in paint fairly hastily. 10/15

 

Balance: Maybe a little cheap, although the 2500 LP cost does hinder it, it's not preventing people from dump reborning it while you have Toon World. 15/20

 

Effect Quality: Very nicely thought out. 18/20

 

Originality: Uhhh, yeah, it's kinda not too original since it's using Konami;s ideas for Relinquished and for Toons. 5/10

 

Little Details: Perfect! 10/10

 

11+5+10+15+18+5+10=74/100=74%=7.4/10

 

Not bad. ^_^

 

01alim: Only 1 card every 72 hours.

 

Others: I'll get to 'em ASAP.

[J-Max]

Fresh Meat straight from the brain of J-Max!
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http://oborochann.deviantart.com/art/Carrot-Bunny-28268021
This card is used to Ritual Summon "Kawaii Bunny Girl - Lucinda". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more from the field or your hand which includes at least 1 Beast-Type monster.
[img]http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/1739/48078sz6.jpg[/img]
The site I found this pic will Offend
This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Chibi Carrot Release". During your Standby Phase, if this is the only monster you control, you can Special Summon 2 "Carrot Tokens" (Plant-Type/LIGHT/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 1500). Increase the ATK & DEF of this card by 400 for each "Carrot Token" on the field.[/align][/b][/i]

[Ultimate Ryan]

Hey Edo mind giving 1 of my newer cards a go around?

[Skyson]

OCG Fix: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while you control "Toon World". You can Special Summon this monster by paying 2500 Life Points. This card cannot attack during the turn it was Summoned. If a "Toon World" on the field' date=' destroy this card.[/b']

 

I don't mean to pick fun, but I laughed when I hit that. <_< "Oh look, a Toon World!" "*BOOM*"

 

Carry on. I'm just spamming at best. :(

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Jspamax: 1 card every 72 hours please.

01alim: Same as Jspamax

 

Skyson's Blademaster of the Infernal Apocalypse

The card's effect:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. While this card is face-up, any cards sent to the Graveyard are turned face-down. Cards that are face-down in the Graveyard cannot be moved from the Graveyard by another card's effect. When this card is removed from the field, turn all face-down cards in both players' Graveyards face-up, and your opponent takes 150 damage for each card turned face-up.

 

OCG fix:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any cards sent to either player's Graveyard are flipped face-down. Cards that are face-down in the Graveyard are unaffected by card effects. When this card is removed from the field, flip all face-down cards in each player's Graveyard face-up, and inflict damage to your opponent for each card flipped face-up by this effect x 150.

 

Errors:

 

-While this card is face-up=As long as this card remains face-up on the field.

-turned=flipped

-cannot be moved from the Graveyard by other card's effects=are unaffected by card effects since the only way to affect a card in the Graveyard is to move it.

-turn=flip

-both players'=each player's

-and your opponent takes=inflict damage to your opponent

-turned=flipped

-150 damage for each card turned face-up=damage to your opponent for each card flipped face-up by this effect x 150.

10/20 Tryin' new stuff can result in wording problems.

 

Name: Cool. ^_^ 5/5

 

Picture: Maybe it's a little too dark..y'know what? To hell with it, it looks awesome. 15/15

 

Balance: Fair enough since you're usually doing 1000 or lower in damage with the effect. 17/20

 

Effect Quality: A little short, could be flashier, it's ok I s'pose. 14/20

 

Originality: Reminds me a bit of D-Fissure and Ceasefire, nothing serious though. 7/10

 

Little Details: Perfect! 10/10

 

10+5+15+17+14+7+10=78/100=78%=7.8/10

 

Wow, nice job. The pic+name and little things helped you a lot.

 

Skyson: Oh yeah, meant to say "is destroyed" after that, I fixed it. ^_^

 

Next up:

 

God Cyber

 

After That:

 

Ultimate_Ryan

 

01alim and Jspamax will not be rated until they choose 1 of their cards and take the other out of their post as to not break the 72 hour rule.

[J-Max]

Sorry you don't understand..... The Ritual Monster needs the Ritual Card to go with it! :D So it is one monster.

[01alim]

ok man, ive changed my post, please check again

(i understand that this must be pretty damn time consumingly hard so u dont have to review my card mate)

thanks if u do though!

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Ok alim I will do your card after Ultimate_Ryan's and Jspamax I will be doing your Ritual Monster after 01alim's card

 

God Cyber, PM me Runarock, Ragnarock, and Destruction so that I can rate your card.

 

Ultimate_Ryan's

 

The card's effect: Whenever this card is attacked your opponent loses 1500 Life Points. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, switch it to Attack Position. You can discard 2 cards to negate the effect of a Spell or Trap Card.

 

OCG fix: When this card is selected as an attack target, inflict 1500 damage to your opponent. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, switch it to Attack Position. You can discard 2 cards to negate the effect of a Spell or Trap Card.

 

Errors:

 

-Attacked=selected as an attack target.

-Your opponent loses 1500 Life Points=inflict 1500 damage to your opponent.

 

15/20 Lost points due to shortness.

 

Name: 3/5 Makes no sense, should be Hades' Chain Mistress or something. Minister?

 

Picture: Only chain is in sync with the name and the background's too plain. 10/15

 

Balance: The switch to attack position sorta balances it out, but the indestructible-ism+negator+1500 damage for attacking it kinda pushes it overboard. 13/20

 

Effect Quality: Short and chopped together, not too impressive. Looks like it was done hastily. 11/20

 

Originality: Reminds me of Marshmallon. 6.5/10

 

Little Details: Set ID should be _ _ _ _-EN_ _ _ with letters in first 4 blanks and numbers in last 3 blanks. 7.5/10

 

16+3+10+13+11+6.5+7.5=67/100=67%=6.7/10

 

New rules: You must post Fusion Material for Fusion monsters and post Ritual Spells for Ritual Monsters.

 

01alim's The Salient Sea Serpent

The card's effect: Increase the ATK of all Sea Serpent-Type monsters you control by 200 points while this monster remains face-up. When you Normal Summon a Sea Serpent-Type monster, that monster may attack directly this turn, in that case, apply half the ATK of the card for damage calculation.

 

OCG fix: All Sea Serpent-Type monsters you control gain 200 ATK. Sea Serpent-Type monsters you control can attack your opponent's Life Points directly during the turn they are Normal Summoned. If it does, halve the Battle Damage inflicted to your opponent.

 

Errors:

-Increase is outdated, use gain.

-While this monster remains face-up is old and unnecessary.

-may=can

-The thing about Sea Serpent's attacking directly during the turn they're Normal Summoned is off.

-attack directly=attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

-You used old Rampart Blaster OCG, check Errata'd Rampart Blaster OCG: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_Errata:Elemental_Hero_Rampart_Blaster

14/20

 

Name: Silent is misspelled, rather plain. 2/5

 

Picture: Cool. ^_^ 15/15

 

Balance: It's fair enough. ^_^ 18/20

 

Effect Quality: Rather Short. 12/20

 

Originality: Reminds me of Daedalus (stats) and Rampart Blaster (effect.) 6/10

 

Little Details: Set ID should be _ _ _ _-EN_ _ _ with the first 4 blanks filled with letters and the last 4 blanks filled with numbers. Also, don't use Circulation, especially Limited Edition, because all Limited Edition cards have gold stickers, and you don't have 1. 4/10

 

14+2+15+18+12+6+4=71/100=71%=7.1/10 G'job. ^_^

 

Jspamax's Kawaii Bunny Girl - Lucinda

The card's effect: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Chibi Carrot Release". During your Standby Phase, if this is the only monster you control, you can Special Summon 2 "Carrot Tokens" (Plant-Type/LIGHT/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 1500). Increase the ATK & DEF of this card by 400 for each "Carrot Token" on the field.

 

OCG fix: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Chibi Carrot Release". During your Standby Phase, if this is the only monster you control, you can Special Summon 2 "Carrot Tokens" (Plant-Type/LIGHT/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 1500). This card gains 400 ATK and DEF for each "Carrot Token" on the field.

 

Errors:

-Increase is outdated, use gain.

-ATK & DEF=ATK and DEF

 

16/20 Lost points for short effect.

 

Name: What does Kawaii even mean? Anyway, it's good. 5/5

 

Picture:

 

The ears are a little dry twig-ish, and this whole "bunny girl" thing seems somewhat, odd. Also, try to get it to have a picture of only 1 person, not 2. 12.5/15

 

Balance: Seems fair enough, since it only swarms when it's your only monster. 18/20

 

Effect Quality: Too short. >.< 13/20

 

Originality: Reminds me or Princess Curran with the rabbit costume...6.5/10

 

Little Details: DOn't use that circulation, this is not a contest, it is a review thread, and use EN in your Set ID. 6/10

 

16+5+12.5+18+13+6.5+6=77/100=77%=7.7/10

 

Nice work. ^_^

[01alim]

BUMP for u. (since you cant double post)

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

Ok, we're all up-to-date. Any more requests?

[Yogg-Saron]

[align=center]

Effect/Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, you may remove this card from play. During your next Standby Phase, Special Summon this card and inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card attacks, change the positions of all face-up monsters on the field (excluding this card). If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon it during the End Phase of this turn. When your opponent activates a card effect that includes destroying a Spell or Trap card on the field, Release this card to negate that effect and destroy the card. During your Standby Phase, pay 500 Life Points. If you do not this card is destroyed and removed from play and cannot be used for the remainder of the Duel.[/align]

[01alim]

thanks for the fix man

BTW salient is a word.....take a look --- http://www.thefreedictionary.com/salient

[Dragon God]

here is my card

[TR_Headshot]

[HelioSpark]

I would appreciate a rate/fix for this card please:

 

Thanks in advance Doom^_^

[Zeroshot]