eric234 Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaden16 Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 its okay but change gets to gain. its more better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Villojody R. Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Preety good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolimar Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Pretty good but slight OCG errors. Here's what it should say:If there's a Dark Hero monster on your side of the field, this card gains 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=aTaLiG= Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 some OCG errors but overal nice card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zack Blaze Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 you must say a monster with "Dark Hero" in tis name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Master Ygo Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 maybe you should say:If there is a face-up "Dark Hero" Monster on your side of the field, this card gains 500 ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Minore OCG and spelling issue(s). Very good picture, OP a lot. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Judgment Dragon Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Good picture, some OCG errors. Slightly overpowered. Not very original idea. Overall not that bad. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyalRooster Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Great picture and sweet card. Overall I rate 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 nice card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 10, 2008 Report Share Posted July 10, 2008 Cool pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolimar Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 you must say a monster with "Dark Hero" in tis name. Actually, no because he made Dark Hero into a type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 you have ocg and spelling problems. I think its overpowered. I like the pic tho. DONT PUT 1ST EDITION! UNLESS YOU HAVE A GOLD STICKER. 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 'While you control a face-up "Dark Hero" monster, this card gains 500 ATK.' i would use something like this....^and your card is ov'pw.... lower the DEF/ATK **happy viewing** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverlighted Posted July 11, 2008 Report Share Posted July 11, 2008 you must say a monster with "Dark Hero" in tis name. Actually' date=' no because he made Dark Hero into a type.[/quote'] Wouldn't it be fine to write it as the OP wrote it, as long as you have quotes, like in Phantasy Dreamer's example. Aren't all themed monsters like that? (e.g. Six Samurai) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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