zlane Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 This is my first posted card outside of a contest.please tell me were i need improvment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverlighted Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Interesting effect...and seeing as how the def is 2000, the level of the monster that can destroy will most likely be greater than four, assuming your opponent's gonna attack it. I like it even though it seems rather difficult to use...unless you have a monster representative of level 5 through 8 in your deck...actually, you might, it'd be interesting to mix this card into a build that's tailored to it. Deck should be capitalized.And I like how the title seems tailored to the picture. The picture's decent, seems a bit...commonplace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aemilius Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 awesome 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 thank you both ill fix OCG now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatchetman_354 Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Nice good pic great effect 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 0 DEF.make the Special Summoned monster 1 Level lower.:S9.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mweal Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 i like it 10/10o i need some one to send me a private message of an idea of what to make next plz help.[attachment=39077] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mweal Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 here is my best card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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zlane Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 thank you, but please dont double/triple post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Nice card. I like the picture. OCG is pretty good. The effect is balanced since it has to be destroyed when it is FACE-DOWN to get its effect. I would use and abuse a card like this! :D I have to give this a 9.5/10. Keep up the good work! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber-Valley™ Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 thats good axually beter than me anyway lol9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloud99 Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 cool... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Cook card. Cool pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 :-)Thanks guys, could you please tell me where i can improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber-Valley™ Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 you dont really need improving on this card its great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Thank you:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 i<3thatpic^^ I'm always a sucker for cute anime chicks^^ And i liek the effect but could be abit overpowered depending the arsanal your Opponent has.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatchetman_354 Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Nice DEF that will result in a higher level card 9/10_________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Cool card, I like the picture ^_^ keep making more :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Finally a newbie who is good. For your first, its very good, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Ah, I have to tell you that there is a grammar and sense mistakes. I wouldn't like to fix it here but by a PM it would be fine. I stopped card making but I always read the new grammar and these things but it will be easy to fix. ^^ ~ Daemon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zlane Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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