oldsk0ol Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Hey I'm kinda new, so just gimma it al, I wanna hear some critics!and some tips. Be gentle with me ^^.and yep it's not an original picture, but I'll work on creating originals one^^-----edit:Okay check it. I read some of your ideas or critics, and I came up with some new Ideas for this card.call it right, attack twice during the same turn. - can only be used once every 3 turns.call it wrong, cannot declare an attack this and the next turn, cannot switch position.how's that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted July 14, 2008 Report Share Posted July 14, 2008 Not showing. add [/img] at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverlighted Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Better ocg would be: Toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, this card cannot attack twice this turn. If you call it wrong, this card cannot attack this turn. I think that's correct...and I'm assuming that fits with your intentions...if not, then change it accordingly. Cool picture btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 lol, might as well have put "Arcana Force" in its card name. "During your Main Phase 1, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, this card can attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase. If you call it wrong, this card cannot declare an attack this turn." Edited because I didn't read it properly. :S 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cameronsdog Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 OCG error Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TR_Headshot Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Cool, but use Don's OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 Cool pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krizo Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 I don't like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oldsk0ol Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 lol' date=' might as well have put "Arcana Force" in its card name. "During your Main Phase 1, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, this card can attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase. If you call it wrong, this card cannot declare an attack this turn." Edited because I didn't read it properly. :S 8.2/10[/quote'] im sorry but my english is kinda blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oldsk0ol Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 lol' date=' might as well have put "Arcana Force" in its card name. "During your Main Phase 1, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, this card can attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase. If you call it wrong, this card cannot declare an attack this turn." Edited because I didn't read it properly. :S 8.2/10[/quote'] yeah true, but i meant, that the card has to wait this turn, AND the next turn, so it cannot attack or switch position, maybe i should add that to the card's description Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted July 15, 2008 Report Share Posted July 15, 2008 They look okay I guess, keep working hard to improve ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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