lindz rox Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Hey ummm... this is my first cardIt probably has huge OCG errors...But still...Please give me help to fix it up :D p.s i have added a card. hope u like it! (it also probably has heaps of OCG errors lol! but hey, we aint all perfect :D)BTW i have fixed up the cards now. hope they are betterish lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rikana Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Just to mention a couple of things: three should be 3 and get rid of the text in the pic, there are probably a few more errors but I'm lazy now since it's 9 o' clock in the morning here in Holland and I just finished work :o but it's a cool card for your first one, good luck in the future ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Not a bad card overall, especially for your first. I'll give you some of the advice you want. First off, I would make the card maybe Level 5 or 6. Here's how you can correctly word the effect:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 "Shadow Lord" cards from play. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 for each "Shadow Lord" card that has been removed from play. This card cannot declare an attack unless you remove 1 "Shadow Lord" from play." And about getting the picture to post without the link. Whenever you make the card, just click on the picture of the card that the maker gives you. Underneath the picture, there will be a code starting with "" to the end of it, and the card should show up the way everyone else's does. Hope I've helped. Any other questions, just pm me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Hey thanks for all your help! i wiil change it immediately :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineRite Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 You're welcome. And as for the "Shadow Lord - Ravenous Dragon". Here's how I would word the OCG on that:"This card cannot be Tribute Summoned except by offering 2 "Shadow Lord" monsters as a tribute. If this card battles with a LIGHT monster, increase the ATK of this card by 1000 during damage calculation only." Another great card. Great idea, good picture. I'll give them both a 8.5/10. If you still need help with OCG, you can read the tutorial posted in this forum, or you can just ask me, I'll be glad to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Hey thanks alot! i will change the OCG rite now :D I might actually make more. i will read the tutorial post! thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donpatch101 Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 The first one is underpowered, while the second is overpowered. Try to strengthen the first one, and make the second one 2200 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted July 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 hey thanks! i do think they are a bit under and overpowered i will change it wat shuld i change the first ones ATK to??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Pics: GoodOCG: OkBalance: 1st card-underpowered. Others, ok9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 what should i change the first one to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 1st card- un'pw2nd card- Penumbral Soldier Lady3rd card- Elemental Hero Wildmanoverall- unoriginal= 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Fine i will change the effects and how shuld i make the first card better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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