Waxing-Pathetic Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 here it is plz rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 OCG errors scattered like blood run loose after a blade cut to the head.The pic isn't that great as well, its...not...well...great...Just plain and dull.Try again/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 OCG and Capital errors.The pic is ok.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Ocg errors everywhere.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Name (2/10) *Yawn*...Image (3/10) I guess it suits the card, nothing special though. Effect (4/10) Send one monster you control to the graveyard, and increase the ATK of another monster you control by the ATK of the monster sent to the graveyard? Try rewording it, you didn't make yourslef very clear. OCG / Grammar (5/10) I see errors. Nothing that can't be fixed though.Uniqueness (3/10) Bah. Nothing that I haven't seen before. Overall (18/50) Much room for improvement. Not too bad, though. Keep up the hard work and you'll get there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Good pic, change atk to attack. Lower level to 2. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringer Of The Apocalypse Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 OCG and cap but i like the effect. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Pic: OkOCG: Getting there. Look at Dj's OCG thread. That might help you.Balance: Ok8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 gain what???ocg errors..pix is blurry..3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Very Dull.Needs more character.Image = No.Overpowered.OCG is badly done.Meh.Ish.Blarg.3.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 the pic isn't great and OCG needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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