Brightstar6366 Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Hey, my first few cards ever ^^ any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Please rate and make suggestions =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Not bad for your first cards. I would go to the "OCG/Grammar Thread" to get some help with writing your text. The cards you've collected could be a big help to. Keep creating. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 16, 2008 Report Share Posted July 16, 2008 Underpowered, slightly. Work on your OCG. There's a link in my signature.Not bad for a new member, though, 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 i agree^^ underpowered and boring. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bazzabaz Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Unicorn-pegasus dancer...Ritual monsters are normally summoned only by ritual spell cards.Try: You can Special Summon this card from your hand by releasing 1 Monster with "Unicorn" in it's card name you control and 1 Monster with "Pegasus" in it's card name you control. Flaming Unicorn...Hmm... I don't like normal monsters... the pic is good. Tamed Pegasus...Bit Overpowered, the pic is too life like (NOT VERy YU-GI-OHish lol)Try: "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, it is uneffected by the effects of Trap and Spell cards."Perhaps make it immune to just 1, not both XD Healer Unicorn...A gr8 card...OCG still needs a bit of work... You don't say "in" the field. There's too many to fully comment on each card lol! But Take a look at the OCG thread(OCG stands for Official card grammar)and keep them bad boys comin'Gr8 4 a new member! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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