Deity Mitsu Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Hey everyone! Glad to officially post the first card of my comeback! There are probably OCG errors because I'm still using the OCG I used for all of my other cards about a year ago, so bare with me while I try to make my successful return! "As long as this card is on the field, you cannot Normal Summon another monster to the field. Each time this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, inflict direct damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of cards in your opponent's hand x300. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, inflict direct damage to your Life Points equal to the number of cards in your hand x200." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bazzabaz Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Good card, balanced... I like the pic a lot. OCG changes... "While you control this face-up card, you cannot perfom a Normal Summon."You also don't need to say "direct damage" just "damage" 8/10Welcome back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Awesome, thanks for the OCG help. It's good to be back! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Welcome back. Problems:1) Say 'While you control this face-up card, you cannot perfom a Normal Summon.'2) Say 'Each time this card destroys a monster by battle...'.3) Say 'inflict damage to your opponent equal to...'. You don't need 'Life Points'.4) Say 'inflict damage to your life Points...'.No more problems that I can see, and good luck.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Thanks a lot man. That will be a lot of help for my future creations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Great Burn card is Great. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Thanks bud :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Thanks a lot man. That will be a lot of help for my future creations.Hey no problem' date=' glad I can help. But welcome back though, I joined not [b']too[/b] long ago myself, lol. I look forward to helping you in the future aswell (not saying you would need any of course). BTW: Look at some of my cards too, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Will do. My next card is coming right up, so stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted July 17, 2008 Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 o.O Balanced for sure... But lacking flow :? 9/10 though ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2008 Lacking flow? :S :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverlighted Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 lol, I love it. I always like a good burn card, and I like how this is pretty balanced. Pic's pretty cool too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 A little overpowered, good pic. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemanzz Posted July 18, 2008 Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Name (5/5) Cool!Image (5/5) Awesome.Effect (5/5) Good Effect. ^_^OCG (5/5) Great... for a year ago. LOLUniqueness (5/5) Very unique.Overall (25/25) A perfect card! The first 25/25 I've given out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted July 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2008 Thanks a lot guys :). :O A PERFECT 25? Geeze, I've heard of 5/5s, 10/10s and even 20/20s, but 25/25? Thats a lot of criteria :P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 19, 2008 Report Share Posted July 19, 2008 Pic: GoodOCG: OkBalance: Ok9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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